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granger_danger
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 14/11/09
Great chapter. Very much looking forward to more, and indeed, a very wise choice making the declaration from Harry's POV. Wonderful!
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it from Harry's PoV. I was a little worried what the response would be to such an act. ^_~

I'm glad you're liking it so far. Hopefully, I should have it updated in a few days. I'm working on Chapter Thirteen of Prelude right now and on a new fic. Wee!

Thanks again! ^^
 

terpsichorean
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 14/11/09
"the odd and peculiar feeling" Didn't I just tell you about modifiers? Sigh.

Ah well.

I don't know if I think Ginny will be all that shocked that he chooses to leave. But it will be interesting to see if she chooses to follow him, or if he comes back for her, and how Harry will react to it all.

I confess I was kind of hoping for something a little more extreme in the sentence. Though I don't really know what. Like maybe Lucius agreeing to a life sentence in exchange for Draco and Narcissa. That would certainly be a change in Lucius character. But perhaps another time.
Author Feedback: I'm sorry, but in the state I am right now, you better get used to modifiers galore! *nods* ^_^

Of course, Ginny should be understanding that he chose to leave, but when are women every understanding in the heat of the moment? ^_~

I was considering an extreme sentence but then I thought, What kind of new world order are they trying to establish, and do they have substantial proof of Lucius' crimes? Really, all they can get him with is destruction of property and conspiracy to commit dubious (even murderous) acts. Plus, he can always use the "Voldemort threatened to kill my family" plea. That and he's rich. The Ministry needs to fix up everything that has been destroyed.

I'm afraid that Lucius will not be in the subsequent chapters. Narcissa, however, will. ^^
 

terpsichorean
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 13/11/09
Nice.

You've managed to get my sympathy for the two of them. How is it all going to shake out? (That is a rhetorical question.) I'm panting with anticipation.

I do think you should cut back on your modifiers a little. Expressionless, inscrutable and unreadable all in a row is a bit much. Not only redundant but repetitive.

I personally also never liked using 'orbs' for eyes. It's just such a weird word. That's just me though.

Nice to see you back. Glad you're well.
Author Feedback: I never met a modifier I didn't like!

Yeah, I could have went easy on the adjectives. I guess, in my delerium, I thought I was Rowling. Hehe. As for my "orbs", I was just sick of constantlytyping eyes or irises. It was time to switch it up. I guess I could have wrote "peepers", but that doesn't seem to carry the right ring to it, ya know?

Hopefully, I should have the next chapter up tonight. Thus begins the showdown between Draco and Harry, and we shall find out whether Draco goes to Azkaban or not. Dun dun dun.

Thanks for reading and reviewing and the weel wishes on my health. ^^
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 13/11/09
unbelievably sweet. Please update again really soon because i definitely enjoyed it.
Author Feedback: I will try to update it tonight. I don't know how sweet you'll find Chapter Fourteen to be though. Heh. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^^
 

granger_danger
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 12/11/09
Oh, another great chapter. I'm so sorry to hear you contracted H1N1, but very glad that you're feeling better. Wonderful fluff here, but man you can feel the angst a'coming.

Can't wait to read more.
Author Feedback: Thank you very much for your genuine solicitude for my health. I am feeling better and hopefully should have no setbacks. *crosses fingers*

I can tell you have read many DG fics for you know the simple formula of supplying several light-hearted, fluff-filled chapters (with some humour) and then the rug gets pulled out from beneath everyone some good old fashioned angst! Mmm, makes for delicious DG brownies. ^_~

Hopefully, I should have the next chapter up tomorrow - and - I shall be updating Prelude either tonight or tomorrow (or e=whenever my beta gets it back to me). ^^

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Lia
 

pr1ncesalat1na89
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 30/10/09
How in the world Ginny managed not to jump his bones right there is just beyond me! Must have been some other worldly strength because i would not have lasted one second of Draco in only a little towel. seriously. Ok now that i got that out of me lol...SUCH AN AWESOME CHAPTER!! I know i called you an awful tease but truthfully who doesn't like good tease? Obviously it makes this story AMAZING and ADDICTIVE so bring on the teases!! Such a great update keep up the good work!
Author Feedback: Apparently I am the Queen of Tease. I have never received so many requests (on here and other sites) to increase the ratings on this story!

I'm really glad you liked this chapter. Fluff-wise, the only chapter that will beat this one is the last one. Now, remember that DG is a roller coaster ride of ups and downs (like visiting you're bipolar aunt). You will end up hating me again, I'm sure. ^_~

Another chapter should be up soon.

Cheers!
 

pr1ncesalat1na89
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 30/10/09
How in the world Ginny managed not to jump his bones right there is just beyond me! Must have been some other worldly strength because i would not have lasted one second of Draco in only a little towel. seriously. Ok now that i got that out of me lol...SUCH AN AWESOME CHAPTER!! I know i called you an awful tease but truthfully who doesn't like good tease? Obviously it makes this story AMAZING and ADDICTIVE so bring on the teases!! Such a great update keep up the good work!
 

granger_danger
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 29/10/09
This story is wonderfully paced and incredibly well written. I love your inner thoughts of Draco, how he would never be a hero. I love it. I must admit that I rarely read Draco/Ginny stories, but I have been obsessed with reading this entire story today. I cannot wait to read more.
Author Feedback: Thank you for such a lovely review. I'm glad I am not making it go too fast. Since it is under a 100,000 word story, I wanted it to have a slow-medium tempo in the beginning then pick it up a little bit faster in the middle. I don't want you girls to be bored to death.

So have I turned a H/Hr fan towards D/G? Oh, I doubt it, but it's exciting to think that I have persuaded you in some way. Allow me to dream. *giggles*
 

RenMalfoy
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 29/10/09
Draco being dominant in the bathroom!Lovedit!! Cant wait for more but ik glad you said you were gouling to work on prelude! Love that one too!! Haha ill keep reading!!
Author Feedback: I'm slaving away on Prelude, yes. She's my baby. She takes a little longer since there's so much plot and mystery behind it. I have to be able to carefully insert subtle clues without giving too much away. Plus each chapter is at least 3-4 times the length of a single chapter of Shades of Grey. ^_^

Thanks for the review. I should have more up by the weekend.

Cheers!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 28/10/09
Oh i totally love this story. But so upsetting that they can't be together. Please update again.
Author Feedback: I'm so glad you're loving it so far. It is rather depressing that they can't be together, especially since they are both starting to realise that they have feelings. They're just not sure what feelings they have exactly and what they should do with them!

I should update soon. I'm actually going to work on Prelude a bit. ^_~

Thanks again!
 

RenMalfoy
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 27/10/09
our blonde sex god is a sensitive! haha

love it!

cant wait for the next chappie!! keep up the good work!
Author Feedback: Sensitive!Draco -- an odd thing to see, no? Hopefully I did it without him looking too sappy.

Thanks for all your awesome reviews, Ren. Another chapter should be up shortly!
 

pr1ncesalat1na89
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 25/10/09
Lol that has to be the best chapter so far!! For a second there i thought those two were just gonna get in on right then and there! BUT... now i see that you are just a big awful tease! I should have known . Still was a great chapter and very entertaining! Keep it up!
Author Feedback: Teen rating! Of course I am going to be a tease! Heheh.

I should have the next chapter up tomorrow. I'm glad you're liking it so far, even though they haven't gotten nekkid with each other yet. You know, if you want to read stuff like that, I suggest reading Mine, Forever and Prelude to an Affair. In fact, I am going to include a naughty bath scene in Mine, Forever to make up for the lack of naughtiness in Shades of Grey. ^_~
 

pr1ncesalat1na89
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 25/10/09
Ooh i have such a weakness when men cry. And just reading Draco crying after that emotional outburst really clenched my heart. Poor thing needs to comforted immediately!! Please keep writing and i'll keep reading.
Author Feedback: It somehow seems manly when /he/ cries, doesn't it? Hehe. He will finally be getting some kind words from Ginny in the chapter I just submitted. I hope you enjoy. It involves bubbles! Heh.

Thank you so much! I will keep writing more chapters.
 

RenMalfoy
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 24/10/09
my vote is for he naked Draco... haha jk it was top notch! haha loved it! haha
Author Feedback: Well it is a teen rating, so you won't really see naked Draco. However, I think I might write a bath scene for him in Mine, Forever. That's a NC17-rated story. Yum!

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews!
 

RenMalfoy
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 21/10/09
i like the turn that Ginny has taken! cant wait for more!! haha
Author Feedback: She's finally softening. Took a while, didn't it? We're still not in the clear yet. Right now she just empathises with Draco. She does not like him ...yet!
Cheers!
 

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