Nicest slice o' pimpkin pie I've had in a while!!! Very suitable, since today is Canadian Thanksgiving lol!! yay! I would love for a sequel! (Probably not, I know, but a Harmoney shipper can dream, right? Hmmm, that's kinda true actually lol)

Anyhoo, just thought I'd review, seeing as I truly enjoyed this one-shot. Now I'm off to read all of your other fics lol

I totally love this one shot. It was so emotional I almost cried.

I would love to see a sequal shot to it.

Awe that was really cute. I liked it a lot. Keep up with the fantastic work that you do with your stories!

Okay... that was by far one of the best harmony pieces ever! loved it... can u please make it a full fledged version... please... pretty please with cherries and chocolate syrup!!

So, you decided to mix both book and movie and it fit well. I like this fic, it's how it should have been, can't wait to read more of your work

Very sweet. I loved it when Ron mentioned the pumpkin pie. Very nice story, indeed.

Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

June 9, 2009

I really liked this. It was a great short story and very, very compelling. You write accurately about Harry and Hermione's emotions. I liked the description of the battles - that's always hard to do - and you did it well.

The kiss at the end was well-done too. I think we all remember our first kiss..but describing it well is another matter altogether.

Good job.

Regards,

the_scribbler

Is this a one-shot ar the start to a larger story?

Eitherway you got me hooked!

dennisud

It was a very good one shot. Very different from the book indeed, and if I'm not mistaken, quite different from the movie too. Well, of course the last part wasn't there but the battle itself was different too, wasn't it?

Nice straight to the point, but doesn't give me the same sense of satisfaction as a longer story would. It just leaves me with more questions that I want answers for . Other than that it was an superbly written story. Well done