Wow, quite the chapter. Don't know how Harry got to her place or how he knew how to get to her place or if he was staying the night... very nice. Sweet and calm at the start, loved how he woke her up, and nice detail on the visualization of the inside of the wrists and the sensations.
Really liked the mind setting of Harry, seems like the way on how he would think to the one he is making love to for the first time.

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Loved this story. I always like when they're just touching at it sort of becomes something not quite platonic. It's perfect- just edging from friendship to more.

That was hot! Wish there were more to it and not just a one-night stand! You definitely need to post more stories up!

This is a great story!

Harmione smut is always nice but this was extra special since they lost their virginity to one another. Excellent!

have you posted this on fanfiction? i was just wondering because it seemed familiar.

my only bit is when harry first enters hermione, you made the comment of harry filling hermione like no man ever had...well, of course - she just said she's never had sex before! lol i just found it amusing and figured i'd point it out since it didn't make a whole lot of sense.

I really really like your style. I haven´t read a good fic in a while so I´m happy I decided to read this one now

Hope you write more. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us!

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Nice one-shot! It was a good mix of steaminess and romance. It makes the reader wish that they both find peace that lasts far longer than just that moment. Keep on writing!

Wow. I think that Harry needs to remember to bring his wand next time. It will make cleaning up easier plus they'll have some wards to protect them from nosy parents.

For a first time fic on here, bravo. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Good luck!

Pretty good!

For me, I would've liked to see a little more uncertainty and less hastiness. Maybe even an explanation as to why Harry was coming into Hermione's room. However, for what it is, the story seemed to flow quite well.

Thanks for taking the time to write!

nicely done, and this event should prevent most of the idiocy that ensued in the canon version books 6 and 7. - No lobotomy to bring our Hermione Jane down to only double Ron's intelligence, no Harry erasing all initiative due to his feeling of guilt and abandonment.

great start - thanks

Fantastic! First time H/Hr, could anything be better? Very enjoyable, very hot!
I can't wait for more from you.
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This was a beautifully, detailed loving moment between two best friend's that turned into lover's

Oh, I enjoyed it just fine, and I'm sure Harry did too I was just pointing out that from the books they didn't give me the impression that they would engage in such activities if not sure of what they felt for each other. Snogging, I could see happening "out of the blue", but this I didn't think would happen. But as I said, it was well written so thumbs up for that

It was a good one shot, however I find it a bit OOC that they would shag without even having been dating before.