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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Hey!! there u were!!! It was such a suprise to have a chap alert in my mail account!!..a good one, of course!... I definitively loved this chap!
plz keep on writing and don't dissapear again!
Author Feedback: Sorry but between life and a spasm of writer's block it took a while to get this chapter out but I am glad to know that it was worth waiting for.
 

HarmonyLover
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
This needs some editing, but as far as plot and conversation go it's very good! I love the way you elaborate on what the locket did to each of them, and I especially like that you've made Luna Hermione's confidant in this case. Seems highly appropriate! She's a good listener, Luna is - it's one of her better qualities. Enjoying this story very much - looking forward to the rest!
Author Feedback: Sorry about the mistakes, I forgot to give it a final look over before posting. As you say I chose Luna for her observant nature and her ability to listen and comfort anyone. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far and I hope you will continue to do so as the story goes on.
 

terpsichorean
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Nicely done. It's interesting to see them so conflicted. I liked the 'Lunacy Line.'

Looking forward to more!
Author Feedback: Thank you I am glad you are enjoying it so far. That line was my personal favorite.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
I like how more and more authors give Luna this role of the observant outside the HHr pair, so that she can give them advice. I think it suits her perfectly, and when she comes out with lines like:

“Is your studying not going well or are you just trying to decide between Ron and Harry?”

you can't help laughing and loving the blonde girl for being so straightforward
Author Feedback: I love writing Luna she is so much fun!
 

mi.nathy
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Hi....so have I told you how i only come to this site for a few authors and your one of them..no, i am not kidding and did I tell you how happy I am you are still updating...no, really.....looking forward to the next chapter..
Author Feedback: I am moved beyond your imagining at being one of the reasons you come to PK. I hope that I will continue to deserve such praise.
 

Mai_Dreizehn
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Cliff hanger again, of course. But then, it's what makes your stories really really good.

I'm not as much depressed after i read this chap as i was after reading the last one. There's hope! Yes!

I'm a little frustrated at the two of them, with all this selflessness and stubbornness, refusal to make oneself happy for once.

I hope she follows Luna's piece of advice. And now I'm pondering how Ron would react when all of this comes out. Will he be a git as before or will he finally grow up and see things as they are?

Can't wait for the next chap (as usual).
Author Feedback: Sorry for the constant cliff hangers but I am glad you like it so far. Ron's reaction will depend on how he finds out I think. What do you think... should she leave off with him and not mention Harry or should she tell him about her feelings for Harry and his for her?
 

kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Great chapter. It's really good and I can't wait to read the rest of it! Update soon!!!!!!!
Author Feedback: Thanks I'll do my best to get out the next chapter as soon as possible.
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
I love Luna, she always makes them see the light, hehe... Now let's see how Hermione handles the situation, I hope she does the right thing
Author Feedback: I love writing Luna she is an absolute joy to put on paper. As to Hermione she will do the right thin but it may take a little time.
 

liamtoha
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/10/09
Hmmmn... pretty complicated. Of course she should follow her heart but it'll be messy. Poor Ron. I do feel a little bad for him from time to time, not enough to like him very much but a little. Esp. when he's portrayed as a fairly decent guy. But who cares, Hermione MUST be with Harry. Screw you Ron!
Author Feedback: LOL... It is sad for Ron and its too bad that he'll have to suffer but Harry and Hermione have suffered quite a bit as well.
 

Grumpy-Numero-Uno
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/10/09
I can see how Hermione may be a tad bit hesitant to let things for further with Harry but she can't deny her heart. Doing that will only make her resent Ron.

Until next time,
Candice
Author Feedback: You are right she does have to follow her heart but that may be a bit harder than one expects it to be.
 

helsing
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/09/09
woo, can't wait for the next. But how come hermione does not demand an explanation for what harry did? Still, every other thing makes it up Please upload soon!
Author Feedback: The explanation for his behavior will be featured in a distant chapter but I hope the new one helps you out a bit.
 

liamtoha
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/09/09
Whoa... so sad... I'm hooked. This made me feel real emotion and now I'm dearly craving more! Hope you can update again asap!
Author Feedback: Sorry to have made you sad, hope the new chapter makes up for it a bit.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/09/09
ahhh!!! im lovin it lol but sadd ending hahah she knows she wants him!!! lol can't w8 4 the next chapter. keep up the good work!
Author Feedback: You are right she does know that she wants him...new chapter is up, hope you enjoy it.
 

Natasha
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/07/09
I can\'t believe you woman you just ley him go without a fight or even a proper explanation of where that all came from..Why do I even try to explain, do you know how long and hard it took him to get to the point to tell you his true feelings? And of You!!! You twit you will fix this young lady. Great chapter but really I can\'t believe you stopped there.
Author Feedback: LOL... the muse stops where it stops but I will indeed make things right. Glad you're still interested...
 

Minnimione
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/07/09
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa nooooooooooo...
i hate it when i dont know whats coming next to the big secret reveling! owww I like your fic you describe felling very well without extend yourself to much and turn itinto a boring thing!
Author Feedback: Thanks again I am glad that you are enjoying the story.
 

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