AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Hey!! there u were!!! It was such a suprise to have a chap alert in my mail account!!..a good one, of course!... I definitively loved this chap!
plz keep on writing and don't dissapear again! |
Author Feedback: Sorry but between life and a spasm of writer's block it took a while to get this chapter out but I am glad to know that it was worth waiting for. |
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This needs some editing, but as far as plot and conversation go it's very good! I love the way you elaborate on what the locket did to each of them, and I especially like that you've made Luna Hermione's confidant in this case. Seems highly appropriate!  She's a good listener, Luna is - it's one of her better qualities. Enjoying this story very much - looking forward to the rest! |
Author Feedback: Sorry about the mistakes, I forgot to give it a final look over before posting. As you say I chose Luna for her observant nature and her ability to listen and comfort anyone. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far and I hope you will continue to do so as the story goes on. |
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Nicely done. It's interesting to see them so conflicted. I liked the 'Lunacy Line.'
Looking forward to more! |
Author Feedback: Thank you I am glad you are enjoying it so far. That line was my personal favorite. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
I like how more and more authors give Luna this role of the observant outside the HHr pair, so that she can give them advice. I think it suits her perfectly, and when she comes out with lines like:
“Is your studying not going well or are you just trying to decide between Ron and Harry?”
you can't help laughing and loving the blonde girl for being so straightforward |
Author Feedback: I love writing Luna she is so much fun! |
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mi.nathyUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
Hi....so have I told you how i only come to this site for a few authors and your one of them..no, i am not kidding and did I tell you how happy I am you are still updating...no, really.....looking forward to the next chapter.. |
Author Feedback: I am moved beyond your imagining at being one of the reasons you come to PK. I hope that I will continue to deserve such praise. |
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Cliff hanger again, of course. But then, it's what makes your stories really really good.
I'm not as much depressed after i read this chap as i was after reading the last one. There's hope! Yes!
I'm a little frustrated at the two of them, with all this selflessness and stubbornness, refusal to make oneself happy for once.
I hope she follows Luna's piece of advice. And now I'm pondering how Ron would react when all of this comes out. Will he be a git as before or will he finally grow up and see things as they are?
Can't wait for the next chap (as usual). |
Author Feedback: Sorry for the constant cliff hangers but I am glad you like it so far. Ron's reaction will depend on how he finds out I think. What do you think... should she leave off with him and not mention Harry or should she tell him about her feelings for Harry and his for her? |
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Great chapter. It's really good and I can't wait to read the rest of it! Update soon!!!!!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks I'll do my best to get out the next chapter as soon as possible. |
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I love Luna, she always makes them see the light, hehe... Now let's see how Hermione handles the situation, I hope she does the right thing  |
Author Feedback: I love writing Luna she is an absolute joy to put on paper. As to Hermione she will do the right thin but it may take a little time. |
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liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/10/09
Hmmmn... pretty complicated. Of course she should follow her heart but it'll be messy. Poor Ron. I do feel a little bad for him from time to time, not enough to like him very much but a little. Esp. when he's portrayed as a fairly decent guy. But who cares, Hermione MUST be with Harry. Screw you Ron! |
Author Feedback: LOL... It is sad for Ron and its too bad that he'll have to suffer but Harry and Hermione have suffered quite a bit as well. |
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I can see how Hermione may be a tad bit hesitant to let things for further with Harry but she can't deny her heart. Doing that will only make her resent Ron.
Until next time,
Candice |
Author Feedback: You are right she does have to follow her heart but that may be a bit harder than one expects it to be. |
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helsingSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/09/09
woo, can't wait for the next. But how come hermione does not demand an explanation for what harry did? Still, every other thing makes it up Please upload soon! |
Author Feedback: The explanation for his behavior will be featured in a distant chapter but I hope the new one helps you out a bit. |
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liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/09/09
Whoa... so sad... I'm hooked. This made me feel real emotion and now I'm dearly craving more! Hope you can update again asap! |
Author Feedback: Sorry to have made you sad, hope the new chapter makes up for it a bit. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/09/09
ahhh!!! im lovin it lol but sadd ending  hahah she knows she wants him!!!  lol can't w8 4 the next chapter. keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: You are right she does know that she wants him...new chapter is up, hope you enjoy it. |
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NatashaUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/07/09
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Author Feedback: LOL... the muse stops where it stops but I will indeed make things right. Glad you're still interested... |
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa nooooooooooo...
i hate it when i dont know whats coming next to the big secret reveling! owww I like your fic you describe felling very well without extend yourself to much and turn itinto a boring thing! |
Author Feedback: Thanks again I am glad that you are enjoying the story. |
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