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i really, really enjoyed it. i'm about to read loss and forgivness.
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: I can't wait to hear what you think of the rest. |
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once again, very aptly chosen title. as for the monologue, i have to say i am loving this trend. it's wonderful how (so far, and i hope continually) you unify all the parts of the series by having a fist person narrative of the history before going onto one pivotal moment/scene in time. great approach, truly! |
Author Feedback: Keeping my fingers crossed on the others. |
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Dome 36Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/09
I read the set of three stories.
The stories are nice and realistic taking into account the fact that two people saw their dreams of happiness destroyed - Ginny and Ron.
The only thing that I don\'t see happen is Ron and Harry rebuilt their friendship. There are things that are too painful. And to be humiliated in your wedding day in the front of your friends and family it is one of them. At the most, I can see Ron and Harry exchanging Christmas Cards and Happy Birthday Cards. Nothing more. Nothing that implies real and serious talk or companionship.
Apart from that, your set of three stories is nice and dramatic.
Good work!
Dome 36 |
Author Feedback: I am in the process of writing Ron's version of things at the moment and I think that once you read it the concept of their rebuilt friendship will be more clear.
Thanks for taking the time to read the series and to leave a review. |
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anaritaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/06/09
I hadn't read Harry's point of view yet. I loved it, I just wish you would deepen what happened in those six months. Anyway, great story |
Author Feedback: For the purposes of a one shot it would have been too detailed to say what happened in those six months but you never know maybe I'll come up with some way to flesh that idea out. Thanks for reading! |
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NatashaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/09
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Author Feedback: I know what you mean about not feeling the need to write I went through something like that recently but for some reason I have gotten a bit fluid of late. As a mater of fact I just post another piece... I'm going to miss the muse when it leaves. Ah, well best enjoy it while it lasts. Thanks for reading! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/09
That was really cute. I am glad to hear to know that you wrote this again. Wonderful job on this. Very interesting to the fact that Hermione told the Ron before the wedding. At leaset she didn't jilt him. Great job on this. |
Author Feedback: Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it. I'm feeling a personal best on this one, not sure I'll write another piece as well received as this one for a while but they won't stop me from trying. |
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filkertomUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/09
I think you're a pretty darn good writer, that's what I think. I especially love that they don't leap into each other's arms, yet no details of how they get together are needed, because they were together already on so many levels. |
Author Feedback: You sum the concept of this piece up perfectly, they are together on so many levels that it is effortless and natural. And thanks for thinking I'm a darn good writer, I appreciate that. |
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ah you did it! when i submitted the review for Moments chap 1, it got me thinking if you're going to write another chap for Harry's POV.
again, another amazing brief piece. one which i can totally relate to. 6 and a half years ago, if i did the easy thing, i wouldn't be in a wonderful relationship with my then guy best friend. so yeah, now you know why i'm a fan of HHr, a fan of best-friends-turned-lovers. Hahah.
Thanks for writing this. Truly sweet piece. |
Author Feedback: I couldn't see doing Hermione's POV without Harry's so I suppose this was a given. Now I've got ideas for Ron and Ginny's POVs so look for those soon.
And good for you for doing the right as opposed to the easy thing. |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/09
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Author Feedback: I'm no sure if all my stories are as good as these but I've got two more ideas I'm working out so hopefully they will be equally as enjoyable.THanks for reading. |
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love it! the immage of harry caring for his tiny little daughter in the middle of the night is so unbelievabel sweet. i hope things will continue jumping into your head...and you keep writing them down for yours and our pleasure.
kudos to you!
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Author Feedback: I can guarantee you at least two more of those leaping ideas. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/09
Again beautifully writen, this is the way it should have been, but with out Hurting other people. so they have a James & lily, PERFECT!
THANK YOU FOR SHARING WITH YOUR READERS |
Author Feedback: It would have been nice if we could have gotten this ending wouldn't it. |
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HazelmistSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/09
Awwww I liked the ending where Harry is with Lily. And I like how you have Harry admit that he was never able to have the same friendship with Ron, it's more realistic. Hmm I never noticed how often Dumbledore talks about choices, interesting. |
Author Feedback: As close as they are I can't see them keeping that closeness in a situation like that, it would just be too hard to do. |
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I liked it. I can't wait to read more of your stories! Keep up the excellent work on them. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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I can't help but think that Harry and Hermione were off the Weasleys' Christmas card lists for a while.  Great fic. |
Author Feedback: They were definetely not getting any sweaters from Molly! |
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That was wonderful,lovely short story.
You did a excellent job with.
I hope to read more of your story's soon.
 this real top stuff.
this so good to read and I hope to to read more soon.
But till then have a real, real,real good Week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good after noon and good night and good luck!"  fade out to black.
then end. |
Author Feedback: Thank you as always for your kind review. |
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