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This is your first fanfic? Really? This is pretty phenomenal writing in my opinion. If this is your first one, it blows me away. There is so much tension in the story that I really like. So far you've kept with the Horcrux hunt scenario, and you're doing a great job with it. Are you planning to deviate even more drastically from that basic storyline? Anyway, you definitely have my attention.
I particularly like that you have Filch become so sympathetic in this chapter. I also really like the relationship between Neville and Ginny (though I know it's against ship for this site.)
The tension between Harry and Hermione is great. I'll keep reading. Looking forward to the rest. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Yes, this is my first Fanfic. I figured I would give it a shot and see how I do, I'm glad you're enjoying it. As far as if I'm going to deviate further, I can't say. I have some ideas floating around in my head, but if I say anything it'll ruin the surprise.
I know that Neville and Ginny are against the ship list for the site, but it's what fit the story. Nothing against Draco, but it didn't fit the story. Glad you like it.
Thanks again for reading, and especially for reviewing. Enjoy the rest as it comes out. |
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Ooh i really really like the whole Anthony and Hannah relationship development. That came as quite a pleasant surprise to me! Can't wait to read more about them. Oh and poor Hermione doesn't drive herself crazy with Harrys not saying i love you back! He just needs some time!! Oh well i guess i have to wait to the next chapter to see how everything unfolds. Can't wait!!!   |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I was worried that diving into some pretty secondary characters was too much, which is why I put it off for so long in the fic. It's nice to hear that people are digging it. I've always wondered what happened at Hogwarts while Harry was away, hope you did too.
As far as Hermione, I hate to hurt the character like that but I have to. Harry's just conflicted, he'll sort his head out. Hope you keep enjoying the story! |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 24/10/09
curious. Harry's seen, but I don't think he believes, yet. I like how you've been switching the perspective among the three groups.
Ron's coming into his own with this, he's more of an active part of the search, even though the obstacles are still the same for the most part.
A very enjoyable telling, looking forward to your next installment. Especially what happens back at Hogwarts.
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Author Feedback: Thank you! As far as Ron goes, I've always liked him. It just seems that too few are willing to preserve the character. To me Harry Potter has always been a story about love. Love comes i many forms.
I'm glad you liked the Hogwarts stuff! I was worried I would throw people for a loop when I added it in, which is why it got put off for so long. It just seems like the part of the whole story that we never really saw.
Well any way, I do tend to go on, Thanks for reading (and dropping comments, it really helps!) I hope you continue to enjoy! |
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hermione24Unsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 24/10/09
Great story, i\'m hooked. I like how you are tweaking it but not changing it.There\'s a certain element of strength that seems to be dwindling from Hermione,i.e the crying and the pining, but maybe that\'s just me 
can\'t wait for the next chapter
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Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm trying to not muck up too much of the original plot. I just want to give it a different spin. |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 23/10/09
avery interesting chapter. Harry taking her into his childhood was a very moving scene, and something that should help move things along.
I like it that Percy seems to be coming back into the fold, though there's a cynical part of me that doesn't quite trust him yet. Luna's father should be an intersting conversation, unless he's trying to sell them out.
Very well written, just a few minor things.
Looking forward to the next installment
apAidan |
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helenadavSigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 22/10/09
Very intersting, and a very creative way to get Ron the missing information. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. |
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Wow i can't believe after all this time that i've been reading this story, it only has 26 reviews. This should be a crime because of how great this story is. Seriously i loved it immediately when i started reading it and amazingly have grown to love it even more. This was a great chapter! I absolutely love Harry and Hermione's relationship in this story. I can't wait to read more of them together. Keep up the great work!!Update soon please!! |
Author Feedback: Wow. Thank you so much. That is bar none the nicest comment I've ever gotten. I'll try to have the next part out soon for you, and again; Thank you! |
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Wow i can't believe after all this time that i've been reading this story, it only has 26 reviews. This should be a crime because of how great this story is. Seriously i loved it immediately when i started reading it and amazingly have grown to love it even more. This was a great chapter! I absolutely love Harry and Hermione's relationship in this story. I can't wait to read more of them together. Keep up the great work!!Update soon please!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 22/10/09
awesome, possibly my favorite chapter yet, your writing style and detail is perfect to me, hopefully you will update soon |
Author Feedback: Thank you, greatly appreciated. Next chapter is coming soon. Thanks again for reading. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 17/09/09
this is really powerful and heart wrenching. keep at it. can't wait for your update. very well written. |
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I Love the story. Keep writing it. Love hermione and harry pairing the best |
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great job, loving the story and loving the harry hermione action. update soon! |
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i'm really enjoying your take on book 7. only a few things, you need to go back to your first chapters and fix the spelling of grimmauld place. you're spelling it with a W. also, you never have them make the transition from grimmauld place to the tent. they're doing recon on the ministry, they're still at grimmauld, they're doing their thing at the ministry, harry gets hurt, passes out, and they're in a tent. it was just confusing. i mean, i know they're supposed to end up in the tent, but the transition/decision, just wasn't there. |
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i'm really enjoying your take on book 7. only a few things, you need to go back to your first chapters and fix the spelling of grimmauld place. you're spelling it with a W. also, you never have them make the transition from grimmauld place to the tent. they're doing recon on the ministry, they're still at grimmauld, they're doing their thing at the ministry, harry gets hurt, passes out, and they're in a tent. it was just confusing. i mean, i know they're supposed to end up in the tent, but the transition/decision, just wasn't there. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 13/07/09
im guessing animagus? could be interesting. i look forward to the next chapter |
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