GemmaH121Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 12/09/09
Hmm interesting. That explains the girl that been around. I wonder why she's out and thinks she lives there. Guess I'll have to wait and see. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! You'll find out more about the girl in the next chapter! I finally updated and I think you'll like this chapter! |
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All I can say is this: keep going!! I've been reading all summer and cannot wait to see what happens next! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I know its been too long but I just updated and I think you're going to like this chapter!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 09/09/09
absolutely brilliant update, a a very nice cliffhanger at the end. i really cant wait for the next installment |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I love cliffhangers and I just updated! |
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This was a wonderful wonderful wonderful chapter!!! Please keep going, its got such lovely twists in it!!
Missie Malfoy 19 |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I just updated and I think you will like this chapter very much!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 09/09/09
Well I think it's about damn time! And this story is good, but the romance is going a little slow, it makes following the actual story dificult, you'r always wondering when they will get together.. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing yes unfortunately it is rather slow but I feel like Lily and James took a long time to get together, I mean just look at the way he treated her in their fifth year. |
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ConeheadSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/09/09
so far it's looking good. i can see it going in a great direction. keep it up! |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 14/08/09
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Author Feedback: Glad you like the story! Dont worry there will be lots more Grace and Sirius! And I'm updating tonight!! |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 14/08/09
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 07/08/09
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I liked this chapter. But I feel kinda like you moved away from focusing on Lily and James. I know that the other characters are important too, but since this ship is so hard to find I kinda want more Lily and James goodness lol. I liked the end of the chapter because it focused on them so much. Keep updating and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.
~One Loyal Reader, CedricsLove |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I know its hard focusing on just Lily and James. Hopefully you dont get upset with me in the furture chapters because it might move a little bit further from them but don't worry they're going to come back into full focus. I'm updating today!!!! |
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hahahaha, hummmm Imm sooooooo anxiousssss to see when they´ll be together... well when she´s going to realise she´s in love with him and blablabla... lol i picture she realising it and out of nothing kissing him!!!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! Youll have to wait and see what happens but I think you'll really, really like not the chapter I'm posting today but the next one, hint, hint. I'm updating today! |
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This was a really really really good update, please keep going as soon as you can, I want to know what's happening next!!!!
Missie Malfoy 19 |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I'm trying to post as quickly as possible! I'm updating today!! |
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GemmaH121Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 04/08/09
Aww cute. I do hope Tiffany will be okay after the death of her dad and not having any other family. At least she has hogwarts. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! You'll see how Tiffany holds up, I think you'll find it interesting, not now but later... I'm updating today!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 04/08/09
This is the first L/J fic I\'ve read and I have to say I really love it. It has everything you need in a good story and I can\'t wait to read the rest. Thanks for converting me to this ship and keep up the great work!
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Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! It's a great ship!!! |
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AshlieUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 03/08/09
Loved it. Well written and very believable! Eagerly waiting for an update. Everything bout this story is right. The pace, the intonation, the characters... PERFECT! Great work! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you like it though I think you give me too much credit! |
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