GemmaH121Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 13/11/09
I love lily's mental arguements with herself. Good chapter can't wait for the rest hope Lily does tell James she loves him. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 13/11/09
Great chapter, I so hoped she would kiss him, too bad she chickened out...this sounds familiar to me, but hopefully I will overcome that fear of rejection  |
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Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa the tension makes me go nuts... haaaaaaaa so many moments the go so closeeeeeeeeeeeeee and then... nothing! I can't stand it! lol |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 19 | Date : 13/10/09
Well it was a nice chapter, would have been better if Lily wasn't so stubborn in her reaction after the kiss, but I guess it would be asking too much of her to be willing to admit she likes him right now  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 13/10/09
I really wonder who this Hope character is, right now the whole story about her seems a bit confused but I'm sure that's what you planned to achieve |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 13/10/09
Sorry for reading this only now. However it was a very good chapter, I really liked it!!  |
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Yesssssssssss they finally have their kiss... buttttt... it also happens that she still is in complete denial!
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Ow and that history ... about hope and all... queer |
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Ahh, I'm loving this, it's really well written. I've not read much Lily/James before, but I'm enjoying this. It's addictive! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 12/10/09
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC MATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really enjoyed reading this. everything is done to perfection as usual. keep up with the fantastic writing |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I don't know about that, but I've updated! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 11/10/09
FINALLY!!!! an update, and a kiss! I'm so happy right now that I'll skip right over how annoyed I was haha! Good chapter, update soon please! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! Haha, I'm updating again so hopefully you will be happy! |
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This was such a good chapter! It was a little bit confusing, but I certainly understand the thing about Hope a lot better now, so thats good. I can't wait to read the next update. I'm sure it'll be very good. I'm also very glad that Lily and James finally kissed! I just wish that we could've seen it a little from his perspective. But of course this story is from Lily's so I understand lol. Update soon.
~OneLoyalReader, CedricsLove |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I know its wicked confusing, just hang in there I promise the whole Hope thing will eventually be explained. I know I wish I could write in James's POV sometimes but this is Lily's story, but in chapter 21 and 22, I can't say too much, but you will get a very, very brief glimpse through his eyes sort of... |
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GemmaH121Signed | Chapter : 19 | Date : 11/10/09
Yeh they kiss. I hope things go okay with Hope at Hogwarts. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! You'll see how things turn out for her soon! I'm posting tonight! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/09/09
Looking forward to more.. The writing is already better than most! |
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I'm really looking for a good Lily/James story. So far I'm liking this one. Why isn't the train leaving???
Candice |
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This was a really good chapter, and I'm excited to see what happens in the next one. I'm a lttle bit confused, but I'm sure that you're going to explain everything eventually. I'm glad that Jame's dad is here, because i know he is going to help James and Lily figure out what is happening. I'm glad that Lily and James are still following thier feelings even though there is so much craziness around them.
~One Loyal Reader, CedricsLove |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! Some things will be explained in the next chapter, I promise. I finally updated after too long of an absence and I think you'll like this one!! |
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