hahahahaha, i like it, it was funny!!! the...
"Unfortunately, her pillow had other ideas.
It moved."
was wonderful!!!!

Cute story. Ron / Parvati's an unusual pairing (at least 'round these parts) but it was a fresh touch.

That's adorable!!!!! Really nice work. Hermione seemed to give in a little too quickly, but everything else was fantastic!!

Love it. Always felt the H/Hr was a better combination. But how did Ron get Harry into Hermione's bed?

so cute. i love it. hahaha. its simple and so sweet. write more H/Hr. you're really good!

hahaha it was a very cute story!
you're a wonderful author
keep it up
-megz-

this was totally awsome, I really liked this. Mainly how parvati got hermione to real her feelings while harry overheard her. I like how she was crying and he went to her, the best part. Thank you for writting.

That was a very good story! You did a really nice job with it, and added a little twist at the end, which is always a good thing. Well written, discriptive, you painted the reader a picture. Well done!

Two thumbs up that was a nice one shot thanks for writting.

Very cute! I wish there was more to it!! Anyway, I loved the entire ficlet and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Cute story! I love how they totally tricked Harry and Hermionie into confessing their feelings for each other!

I thought this was exceptionally well written, especially personifying the pillow, amazing. Good piece, great job!! Welcome to Portkey!

That was fun to read. It was nice to read a story that takes place back in good old Hogwarts; so many stories lately have been post-Voldie adult stories and every now and then I miss reading about H/Hr as nothing more than just a couple of school kids.

I did think Harry's jumping out of the bed and the subsequent conversation with Hermione was a bit cliched or predictable, as was the idea of a "plan" to get them together, but it was well written none the less. You really seem to have a decent grasp on their characters and wrote each quite well.

Keep up the great work, I'm eager to read more of your stuff, and thanks for sharing.

oh wait! I missed the part where it said that it was a one-shot.

T___T
Darn. I would like to know though how Ron got the drinks and got Harry up to Hermione's bed xD
It's hilarious!

Sneaky, sneaky! This was funny. Hermione fell right into her trap. Funny though... how she sort of forgot for a few beats that Harry was in her bed and could hear everything they were talking about.

I can't wait to see whats next ^__^