i applaud you and all portkey authors for not letting our favorite guy and girl go with what's expected of them. screw picture perfect and fairy tale. let's go for the real thing. you should always marry your best friend, the one that knows you best.

I want Harry and Hermione together......OF COURSE

Why in the world she married Ron....

I will be sorry that Ron will be hurt, because he is a nice guy, but who the heck cares about Ginny....

Looking forward to the next chapter.

It will be really Hard to hide something as powerful as this

Oh I've read this kind of stories, it's hard to write an affair fic, I feel bad for Ron, not Ginny, I don't care about her much, lol but Ron... oh well, can't wait to see what happens next!

WOW THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY IT WOULD BE A SHAME NOT TO GO FURTHER WITH IT
I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

Oooh, I really like this! You've set them up really well, so the whole story doesn't seem forced into a cliche, if that makes sense xD Hope to see a new chapter soon!

A very good beginning, I think. You've set them up fairly well.

both of them are walking the sword's edge here, and they both jump together. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Hey great start I love it!! Can't wait for more, please update soon

wonderful start! I would love to see where you are going with this.

Ok, I do feel that this has the makings of a good hhr fic. However, I got a couple of uncomfortable,rather unlikeable feel about a couple of things about it--HR and R married (it certainly puts a dead end ringer on that part, any diversion is cheating, and its kinda difficult to see HR cheating on someone she loves enough to marry..)

and second--george and fred setting up a non-magical store?--kinda OOC to me...these two are the least likely to delve into anything muggle-related things or non-magical...

Other than that, I like the way things are turning out for our ship...their reluctant foray into the forbidden...thats wicked! ;-)

I hope you could upload soon on the next chapter.