Not a bad start. Can't wait for the next chapter.

A really nice chapter - I liked how you brought Hermione and Harry together and then made the announcement of their relationship such a straight-forward, easy declaration. It was also interesting to see how you dealt with Hermione's muggle-famly members. It seemed that you could 'feel' the interaction and it was a nice read as a result. It was believable - I didn't have to struggle to see the conversation in my mind's eye.

I'm looking forward to your next chapters!

Regards,

the_scribbler

Gee, this is a really sweet chapter. You can feel the love starting to blossom and grow. I'm glad that Hermione will go back to her family. Great job!

Gee, this is a really sweet chapter. You can feel the love starting to blossom and grow. I'm glad that Hermione will go back to her family. Great job!

Oh so sweet! I don't know if I had reviewed before but if I hadn't lovely story, can't wait to read the next chapter, let's hope aunt Imogene behaves better

Awwww... yay! I'm glad that she isn't going to have to cut ties with her family and I love that she is gonna hook up Luna and ron. Great job.

Well, it looked like the treacle tart worked!
Very nice chapter with a lovely Luna cameo, and some tidbits leading up to a nice potential bit of angst at the Grangers.
I look forward to reading it.

Cute fic. I like how Harry has helped Hermione get through the loss of her parents. Also, love how Luna knows American Football.!

that was a lovely chapter to read.
and Happy New Year.
I am watching some football now.

wondeful story.
excellent plot line.
please continue it.
I am looking forword to the next amzing chapter.
Harry and Hermione are wonderful for each other.
but right now it's time to go,so till then have a real good week and weekend.
cue Portkey Pig.
Portkey Pig" Tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!"
and me.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good Monring and good after noon and good night and good luck!".
input cartoon soundtrack.
fade out to black.
the end!

very cute story, i like it. Keep up the good work and update soon. thank you

This story is getting better and better every time I read it!I love it! Keep up the fantastic work on it!

I remember reading this last year but thought I'd read it again. Very nice. Can't help but think of the OotP scene when you have Hermione pop up with melting snow strewn over her head. The idea of each one helping the other get over their post-Voldemort guilt is a nice idea too.

There's no Pumpkin Christmas this year, I gather?

This really is a lovely story and I'm glad that you took the time to sit down and put it on paper(?)...well, you know what I mean.

Anyway - it's fun to see the two people we like best becoming the couple that we know they can be, during such a festive and important time. In particular, I liked very much the ice-skating and how her unfortunate fall really precipitated their kiss. That was a particularly nice touch.

You wrote:
"He felt Hermione draw back slightly in surprise, but he followed her and refused to lose contact with her warm lips. He slid one hand behind her neck and into her hair and felt her hands creep up to his shoulders. Encouraged, he parted his lips and even as he was about to touch his tongue to her mouth, asking to be let in, her hands flew up and tangled in his hair as she deepened the kiss."

That was as nice a description of their first kiss as anything I've read...and you should be pleased that it came out so well. Not many writers get it so 'right'

I look forward to your next chapter!

Regards,

the_scribbler

Aw, dear. Reading this all over again was amazing! It brings back such good memories. It's also great to hear you have new ideas to continue it! I can't wait

Awe such a cute story! I loved it! Keep up the excellent work on it and all of your other stories to come! You do an amazing job!