Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/09
Well, this must be the strangest story I have ever read. And, tbh I hoped in a different ending, if you know what I mean. Also, I can't believe (and don't like) how upset Harry was about Ginny in the "dream". I really felt like throwing up with the way he was pining over her.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/11/08
ARGH!! GAH!! CURSES!! I was so not expecting the ending when it came. For .2 seconds I was freaking out hoping there was a second chapter and then I saw your author's note. Needless to say - I really, really liked this story and am most relieved to know that you plan to write a sequel. I am mucho interested in what happens next and will be all over that sequel like white on rice. Thanks for posting this! |
Author Feedback: haha thanks so much, good thing you actually read the a/n or i'd have one nasty review. |
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Omg this is a seriously good 'what if' story! omg i was sooo scared for harry! it's just a terrifying thought waking up and seeing that you've switched lives with someone else and that everything you had was no longer yours. It really makes you think about your own life actually. Really brilliant!! Oh i hope you do write a sequel!! YOu hav alot of talent!   |
Author Feedback: omg, thank you so much  that was what i was really aiming for! oh! and to maybe freak some people out, cause if i was in his position i know i'd be pretty damn scared, lol. |
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Can you pretty, pretty please never use that yellow for chapter titles? It's painful to read, and it really blends into the white background.
Aside from that, excellent fic, and I look forward to reading more of your work. |
Author Feedback: sorry about that  i type up my fics on microsoft word 2007 and their titles are blue, but turn up yellow here. i don't know why that is... but i'll change it if it's painful to read. and thank you very much, i look foreward to writing it  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/08
Why is this story R-rated? And why are they not really together in the end, even if portkey rules demand it?
It was not badly written, but this CAN'T be the end of this story (semi-happy or not), technically. Because this end just sucks, technically. Please clear that up.
Greetings |
Author Feedback: it's R-rated for language. i used to get yelled at for putting too ranchy of language for a PG-13 fic, so i just wantedd to be safe. and NO! this is deffinitly NOT the end of the story!! I'm putting up a sequal as soon as I finish my other stories, so i can just focus on them. i'll get harry and hermione a happy ending, i promise |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/08
a very good story, and the dream / dimensional Harry was still believable. An interesting thought to take from him all of the things that made him Harry, but with him knowing it.
Looking forward to the sequel. Sometimes one must go close to canon to break it |
Author Feedback: thanks i tried to make him like me; if my life was just suddenly reversed i'd freak out!! lol. and yes, the canon was pretty difficult to write... but you gotta do waht you gotta do. |
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Well that was some thing.
Are you going to continue this wonderful story?
I am looking forword to the next excellent chapter.
Is Harry and Hermione going to be on a date soon or not ?
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
Looney Warner Mouse" Good night and good luck!" |
Author Feedback: aww, thanks you. the story is technically "finsihed" but i DO plan on making a sequel and get our favoirte pumpkins-a-snoggin' |
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