this story is very good with its original storyline. I feel hermione's pain from your words and its really good.

I really and truly sincerely wish you would continue this story. I have it on my alerts... it has so much potential. I just want to read how she felt when the other Harry came along looking for his Hermione. I want to read about her sliding through different worlds looking for one that has a Harry who needs her. Please, just write a little more?

*sad face* Where'd your muse go? Should I put out a bounty?

this is very well written. Hope to see more chapters

I can't wait for the next chapter! I really enjoyed Shadow Walks, so I'm really excited to know how this one turns out! Keep up the good work!

Hope RL is ok. Just wanted you to know that I still want to read!

One of the fics I want most to be updated. Hermione must be saved one way or the other.

You are so awesome with dark tragic stories. Love the gutsy Hermione. Poor Neville. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Awesome story. I just read "Shadow Walks" and was interested to see what would go on with the alternate Hermione. The plot for that story was absolutely amazing! How did you come up with a theory like that? You're a very talented writer. Keep it up!!!

Gosh, I love you Lorien!
You write some of my favourite fanfics!
Resistance, for example --- gosh, I remember reading that last year... I was so eager to see what happened that I spent half of Christmas Day locked in the study on the computer!!!

You write so eloquently and beautifully, I aspire to do the same!
You are my idol

Thanks for such wonderful work!
Ariane xxxx

My god......

That is....*speechless* If I could get my hands on Lucius I would kill him myself.

The bastard. Update soon!

~Harmony_4ever88

Oh, man. Yes, I can see why this trip would have been a turning point.

Yes, still interested!

Yay! I've been meaning to get to this story and now, I've read the first three installments and want more! I wrote in my review of the original story that I would love to know what happened to the "other" Hermione, and here you've started the answer. I really like what you've done so far, and I'm glad you're making this longer than the 2-3 chapters you originally thought to write.

Do you have any idea how long this will be? I don't know if you plan the stories out completely or sort of wing it.

Anyway, I have enjoyed these three chapters, and my fear for Ron and Ginny is already high, since I can't recall offhand what happens to them from Shadow Walks. Will she leave this reality or just Britain? Will she rally everyone against the hated Malfoys or not, since everyone she cares about is (I think) dead after the "other" Harry passes through?

I loved Shadow Walks, but I still say that having this Hermione follow "our/that" Harry back to his reality, or having "this" Hermione be *his* Hermione just trying to ascertain who he was, would have been pretty cool plot ideas.

Thanks for your writing, and keep up the wonderful descriptions of imagery and emotions.

I like the last bit, where Ron shows solidarity with Hermione. Poor Neville -- but he was probably one of the few who could have successfully resisted Lucius. Son of famour Aurors, Pureblood, hero (and The Almost Chosen One), he'd have carried considerable clout. So he had to die, if we're to get the world we've already glimpsed.

The thing that gets me most is the speed and efficiency with which Malfoy's goon squads advance their agenda. Quite unlike Book 7, where even with an Imperio'd Minister and plenty of anti-Muggleborn sentiment, the Death Eaters never really made an effort to weed out their opposition. I doubt that Malfoy will make that mistake.

Chillingly well written, as always, lorien. Looking forward to more.

Blast it ALL. I still don't have any review points for chapter alerts. And with DH already published, there's hardly any stories I'm ever interested in, though PK seems to think so, sending me copout chapter alerts from writers I never recognize.

Great chapter. Very sad, with Neville dead, Parvati the killer. Hmmmm. Hermione is perfecting that front of nonchalance, that 'glacial' eye contact.

Man. I can't wait to see what happens next, though it's most likely another depressing one. I wonder what you'll do with the Harry that came in Shadow Walks, we got some of Hermione's point of view, but I always wondered about Luna, and how Hermione survived that way.