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This was wonderful. It had everything a great story needs. Angst, humor, romance! It was a wonderfully thought out, and written story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much I am glad you enjoyed it so throughly. |
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yukashiiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/09
one two three four five six seven eight nine ten... sorry i just wanna add the story or author to alert |
Author Feedback:  ...cool! |
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muggledadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/08
EXCELLENT!! this was wonderful. The mild angst, the surrogat dad, the realizations. Wonderful. 10/10
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Author Feedback: Thank you. |
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CryHopeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/08/08
I think this is brilliant. That's what I think. I'm going to pretend this is canon from now on. |
Author Feedback: You are going to pretend its canon from now on...hmmm...I suppose you would really appreciate me writng and uploading the companion piece that's been stuck in my head since I wrote this piece wouldn't you. |
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Oh how i wish something like this had happened in canon too!!! great..... |
Author Feedback: LOL...don't we all! |
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indy_louSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/08
I absolutely adored this story. It was extremely well written with a believeable plot. Well done. |
Author Feedback: I found the challenge and gave it a try. I think it turned out well. I'm glad you liked it. |
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Great story. I really liked your take on the Rose Weasley challenge. It was interesting to see Harry and Hermione grown up and middle aged and the way that they interacted with each other and their children. |
Author Feedback: It was actually a lot of fun to write. There is a bit of a part two running through my head but I haven't gotten it down on paper yet. Perhaps you'll see it posted here at some point. Until the next time...Happy Reading! |
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this is so wonderful!!! it's just so touching. i love this story. thank you for writing this. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
ooooooooh!! wow. That's awesome!! NICE JOB. I liked the detailed descriptions of the kids and their traits (very helpful), but I would have liked a little more Weasley character development, if only to understand why Rose kept saying that Harry was her only supporter w/ Ted. NICE!! |
Author Feedback: The basis of that was that Ted and Victorie were an item for a long time and they seemed to be headed down the aisle before Ted called things off. A while later he and Rose got together and very short courtship married. The relationship was a very sore spot for her cousin and some of the other members of the Weasley family.
Hope that helps! |
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Heeeheee!!! I loved this story! I don't really like stories that are post epilogue but the summery intrigued me, I'm so glad I gave it a chance!
I love that you aged Harry, giving him graying hair instead of keeping him forever young. I can see Harry having a full head of salt and pepper hair, being a handsome older gentleman.
Rose was wonderful in this, and her figuring it out so quickly, we know whose brains she got!
Great story, a definite fav! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for your kind review. I am glad that you gave this story a chance. |
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great story.. loved james and al's convo at the end.. this one is fairly different than the other entries to this challenge i don't think the ones i read went this far n the fucture. great job
ramble on
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Author Feedback: Thank you for reading and revieiwng. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/08
Excellent work!!! I've enjoyed all your fics.
Rose certainly reminds me of Hermione in personality and how she put the pieces together watching Harry with Al & James while holding Caleb. Nice allusion to Harry\'s mum with Rose\'s auburn hair. You really caught my attention in the beginning introducing her as \'Rose Lupin\'. |
Author Feedback: Thank you I am pleased that I intrigued you and managed to keep you entertained to boot. And thank you so much for supporting my feeble ramblings. |
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MichaelaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/08
Awww! That was really cute I liked it.
It would maybe be a little better if you added a little "epiloge" for Harry and Hermione.
I know..I am a sucker for happy endings and I ended up grinning like an idiot at the end.  But overall I loved it.  |
Author Feedback: Actually there was a "little epilogue" but I omitted it. Perhaps I'll add it even you all would like to read it. |
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Aww... that was beautiful. Cute and short and sweet and canon, even. I love it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. And thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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I've read a few or maybe one ( don't exactly remember ) on the same challenge and have enjoyed it quite lot. your's was also very good and a bit different. For instance, none of them had Rose bonding so well with Albus and James. It certainly was good. |
Author Feedback: I can't see Harry, Ron and Hermione's kids not being friends. Somehoe that just seems wrong. Glad you liked it. |
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