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Very interesting concept and (so far at least) technically well written so I'm going to keep reading despite the way you allowed your own feelings to take over Mara's rant about HP canon which really didn't seem to fit.
I did like the character up to the point you used her to tell us your opinions of the HP characters and having someone shove Harry's nose into what was going on is a believable way to get him to change how he reacted to Dumbledore and the Weaslies I simply don't see why Mara should care.
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I got curious after I glanced at your summary: did you borrow the "Somewhere in Time" title from the movie starring Chris Reeve and Jane Seymour?
Sorry I haven't read the fic; I've generally been allergic to WIPs since sometime before HBP.
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tickySigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 03/12/08
I am enjoying this fic immensely. And can't wait for more. |
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tickySigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/12/08
Of all the redo back in time fic I have read this is by far the most original. |
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Brilliant, as per usual!
I am enjoying this so much. Thank you! |
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tepiestarSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/12/08
did i miss the bad part? or was when harry got attacked by grindylows? did mara help him there? haha. a full set. i love the omakes. yay, thanks for the update. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/12/08
Yes, I found that strange in GoF, but I guessed it was because of the time they spent together in the library, he might have seen she was different from the other girls who chased him, but anyway it was a bit unsettling.
I liked this chapter a lot, let's see how this pregresses |
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BexisSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/12/08
If you're going to parody another movie franchise, I recommend James Bond.
- Bexis |
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Maybe Krum doesn't have a family? lol who knows... to make Ron jealous I guess JK did that :s |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/12/08
I'm pretty sure that the woman is Lara Croft from Tomb Raider. But if it isn't my second guess would be Sydney Fox from the TV show Relic Hunter. |
Author Feedback: You're right, it's Lara Croft.
I've never even heard of Relic Hunter. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/12/08
The woman with the Golden Idol was Lara Croft from Tomb Raider, wasn't it? |
Author Feedback: Yep. |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/12/08
I agree, the Tri-Wizard people must have just been too lazy or Krum's relatives couldn't make the task.
Excellent chapter, loved the Omake, no more Vernon, eh, awesome! |
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loved it. absolutely loved it, especially the omake at the end, and i completely agree with you it's a little strange that hermione was krum's thing he missed the most. he obviously has family that show up before the third task, why wouldn't they be one of them. they take gabrielle for fleur. it's pretty disturbing to me as well. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 01/12/08
Great story and I could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the rest of the story, hope it comes soon. |
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Shaggy37Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 01/12/08
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