At first I thought that this challenge was a bit silly, but as I read Strawberrynerds and your response i grew to like it very much, so I do hope you will pick up writing on this story again, as i really would like to see it finished Also, i have a suggestion for both a DDR and for an event in the next chapters. You could write the scene where the old muggle that dies in the start of GoF is killed, and then told about magic and for an event, that would also change the course of fate, you could let Wormtail grab onto Harry as he gets back from the graveyard, if he ever goes there in the first place that would result in Sirius being free and Harry escaping the Dursleys.. Oh, and another funny DDR would be either Ron, Ginny or Dumbledores accidental death, if you were to have them killed or ofcourse Crouch Jr.

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Love the story--rather tongue-in-cheek and very much better than rereading the book (as it\'s different). You\'re a great writer so keep going.

Great story, a bit strange and off the harry potter universe in general, but its really great. I quite like the interruption with reapers. Only thing i can lay a finger on at the moment, would be the missing reason, as to why harry has travelled back through time and space to his 4th year. I would really like an answer to that soon, but as long as it will come, i'll just give you big thumbs up! Keep up the good work.

my fav part was when mara told harry to stip calling her mum that hella funny!

I love this story, a brilliant concept, the idea of Harry being watched over is just classic and the I love the character of Mara.

I am looking forward to seeing the scene in the graveyard when Tommy-boy finds "the bones of the father" are missing

Please hurry and update

Interesting fiction. I've always found this challenge to be amusing. Keep it up!

wow brilliant story! i'm guessing (from way back in the first (?) chapter that you are the guy at the desk who send harry to mara? i would've said the old man, but then when you said you got a game i figured it was more likely to be the other dude...

loving the wee extracts from ... uh ... heaven? hell? whatever that place is but you know what i mean. i didn't know what kind of story this would turn out to be, but i love the fact it is a harry goes back and changes everything story! it feels like the wrongs have been righted. but i was expecting a twist in the 2nd task as well, but i guess that's for the final task (?)

so how long will this go on for? hopefully for ages! i'll keep my fingers crossed!

cannot wait for the next installment!

I really enjoy reading your story. It's really funny and nice that someone else sees Ron for the pain that he really is!

Amazing Chapter
i love the woman that processed harry
she's hilarious
and i love how you changed the most missed person to hermione
update soon

well, no one has ever used The Sims, at least that I have seen. weird people gibbering in simlish.. jumping up and down, acting weird..

Harry telling Hermionie without worrying about Snape finding out and giving Sirius so much information while incredible stupid are in character. Harry immediatly believing Mara about Ron and Ginny while much more sensebile is very much NOT in character.

Additionally I really hate the illogic many fanfiction writers use when having getting Harry into the Tournament be so easy. Granted JKR didn't explain how it was done but assuming there was nothing more to it than some random person dropping Harry's name in the goblet makes even less sense than the 7th book.

The Unicorn

Very interesting concept and (so far at least) technically well written so I'm going to keep reading despite the way you allowed your own feelings to take over Mara's rant about HP canon which really didn't seem to fit.

I did like the character up to the point you used her to tell us your opinions of the HP characters and having someone shove Harry's nose into what was going on is a believable way to get him to change how he reacted to Dumbledore and the Weaslies I simply don't see why Mara should care.

The Unicorn

I got curious after I glanced at your summary: did you borrow the "Somewhere in Time" title from the movie starring Chris Reeve and Jane Seymour?

Sorry I haven't read the fic; I've generally been allergic to WIPs since sometime before HBP.

I am enjoying this fic immensely. And can't wait for more.