JarkeSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/07/09
I really enjoyed reading the other 2 "Harry Black" 'books' and I really, really hope you will resume working on this, and write to year 7. If you don't feel up to it, I suggest you "hand over" your plot to another author, since I really think your plot is great. I've also read Light's Hope and I think you're a really good author.  |
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wow brilliant story! reads as well as a professional book! but what's with the lack of updates???
about ron and ginny you could bring them in this year, especially since harry saved ginny so she could show her "appreciation". since sirius has already been rescued, which was the point of the 3rd book, there's not really much happening unless you bring a few events forward. but i guess that's what the whole dumbledore resigning is about right?
anyway please update it's a shame to see brilliant stories incomplete! can't wait to read your other work! |
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JarkeSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/05/09
I really enjoyed reading the Harry Black stories, so keep up the good work. As for Ron and Ginny.. well if you can find a suitable reason for them joining in, then go ahead, but otherwise just keep them in the background. |
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Jane_LupinUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/04/09
HI,
COULD YOU PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER?
AND IF YOU NEED ANY IDEAS YOU COULD ASK ME THROUGH MY E-MAIL i.e janelupin@rocketmail.com |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/07/08
is there going to be a year 4 ? i have injoyed the first 3 years |
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Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/06/08
I hope you feel better to write more, this is really good stuff, I totally forgot about Ron! One question, why is Emma changing to? |
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lemondropUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/06/08
is this fic abandoned? i hope not, cos i really like the whole take on this! i think maybe a bit of threat to harmony would be interesting lol, not much on the romance side of things going on yet |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 29/05/08
Great story, and could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon. |
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AelitaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/05/08
I really like this story but I hope you update soon, I think that Ron and Ginny should be brought into the story as a threat to the group. I dont really like the Weasley's (as you can guess) Please update soon! |
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CogsterSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/05/08
Heh, Sirius can't ever catch a break. Curious whether or not failure to recognize it has an impact on the result later. Looking forward to another chapter! |
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I think it'll be cool that Harry will be able to speak to Blaise in Parseltongue when she's in her snake form. |
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I know it's too late to vote, but I'd like to add that I hope you kept them out of it, I don't mind the Twins, or Bill and Charley, but Percy, Ron and Ginny are my least favorite Weasleys, and I'm glad that there are gonna be new teachers. |
Author Feedback: It's not too late, but rest easy; the votes of leave them alone versus bring them in are almost 2/1, so I wouldn't worry.
Now keep going, you still have five fics to review.  |
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I think I'd brave that horrible tasting potion for the ability to turn into an animal at will, that would be so cool! Great beginning |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/08
Ok, I've read Light's Hope, Death's Hunters now, and I must say I'm far from impressed by it, to use an euphemism.
The time jumps were disturbing, yes, but it was nothing compared with what you made Harry and Hermione become, and it's not like I hate dark!HHr fics, I even wrote one myself. But you pushed it too far, I think, making him really heartless. I woulnd't have been surpsied if after killing Riddle he became the next Dark lord, considering how ruthless and cruel you made him, and Hermione too, although we see far less of her methods.
So, in the end...if you do repost the story with more details about the years they were away, do not count on me being a reader.
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Author Feedback: Hmm...I'm sorry you didn't like it.
At least you like all my other fics.... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/03/08
Keep the Weasleys as background characters, thank you. I mean, you could have Harry have a date with Ginny, and Hermione with Ron, but nothing serious. No real romances, only a date to see they are not meant for each other, if you really feel compelled to have them as a threat for our harmony. Maybe you could have Hermione and Harry being jealous of the other dating someone else when they go on those dates with the Weasleys.
Are michael and Blaise going to end up together? |
Author Feedback: Michael and Blaise...for the longest time, I was, but recently I have been toying with them getting together with other people (or at least temporarily dating them). We'll see. |
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