Kaya420Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/09
Your an awesome writer.. I could help but read ALL your stories and i liked each n everyone of them.. especially the vampire one  lol.. cant wait to see what you got for us next |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/08
Nice one, I loved it. Really. It was sweet, although I kind of didn't like Hermione leaving so hastily before he woke up... |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/08
It was a bit fast-paced, but all in all i liked it. I had to giggle at luna you really caught the essence of her character. |
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I really liked it. Very sweet and very simple. Harry and Hermione both drunk was just adorable. Loved the whole thing |
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WolffSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/07
Nice. I needed something soft and fluffy like this after the day I've had. My only complaint is the complaint of everyone who's ever liked a story: IT'S NOT LONG ENOUGH. Heh. Nicely done. |
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MrsGordoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/07
Thats left me all warm and squigly inside. Lovely stuff! Rhiannon |
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Awww what a sweet story! The ending was adorable. I love all your stories so write more soon! |
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Very cute story! But, not so cute/fun for them when they were drunk and passed out although, I'm glad they remembered their kiss! (I like the lyrics at the end, what song is that from? I don't listen to Toby Keith.) Great job on your first one-shot! Concise, well-written and very interesting to read. Good luck on any future one's you may have running around in your head! |
Author Feedback: You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This, from the album "How Do You Like Me Now" (1999).
You can find the lyrics at...
http://www.cowboylyrics.com/lyrics/keith-toby/you-shouldnt-kiss-me-like-this-14715.html
You can find the music video for it at either Yahoo! Music or YouTube. |
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it was nice. i really liked it. and the lyrics are wonderful. |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/07
And a very nice oneshot it was too! I adored Luna; she was entirely in character, I thought. I liked Harry and Hermione just going along with her when it came to the creatures infesting the seats, etc. Harry was amusing as a drunk, particularly with his planning to be sober the next day for the wedding. I liked that he got dumped because his girlfriend thought he was too involved with Hermione, and Hermione's reaction to getting dumped was great. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/07
Oh this was sooo CUTE! I loved it! I really liked the part with...'by the power veseted in my by the ministry of magic'... that made me laugh!
Your stories are soo good i cant wait till you update one that you already have or you make a new one! |
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Aw, I really enjoyed it! Yaay for Harry remembering the kiss and then confessing his love. I thought it was so cute that you made Teddy & Victoire part of the wedding. Well done! |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/07
I think this is very sweet. Plus, super cheers to you for ignoring the infamous epilogue. Your creativity really shows through that. Lovely work.  |
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That was pretty cute. I can't wait to read more though....
*%* Susanna *%* |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/07
Harry and Hermione are always the last ones to find out how much they LOVE each other. |
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