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canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/06/09
I liked the ending it seems a lot more... realistic?! I don't know... all I know is I loved the story - nice plot, good ideas, great writing.
You have a gift for keeping your reader in...
keep it up
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canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/06/09
It's a great story... I'm loving it, sorry I couldn't show my support from the start, but also happy because then I get to read it all the way through in one go... no matter how long it'll take me!!!
keep it up
-megz-
 

canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/06/09
Just like sirius... the only thing that kept him sane was the thought that he was innocent. Question though... how did Hermione know that Ron had something to do with it? I thought she wasn't allowed in.
keep it up
-megz-
 

TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 26/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 26/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 26/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/05/09
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TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/05/09
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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 21/05/09
I like how it ended. I think it is cool how they just sort of naturally ended up together and it evolved into a family.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 04/05/09
nice.the only shortcoming is that the fic is abit short.Ok, I just read your ending note and you said its too short too. Maybe one day when you have time or feel like it you can write a longer one? And a more darker theme too, the angsty kind.
To the gun instructor reviewer. Sweet. Im glad you like the colt .45 too. I always think highly of the 9mm as a kid and when i went to my national service, I was estatic to use the 9mm. I practised it more than the rifles and during my light infantry entrance exam after bmt the instructor joke about how I should have gone to police academy instead after seeing my pistol score but after my army days were gone, I pick up a colt .45 and now I've been carrying it for years. I like to act like hitman 47 and carry 2 colt.45 acting like they're ballers. Its a pity that civilians having silencers is illegal in my country. 9mm is like kid toys now.
 

TxA_GunFighter
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 13/03/09
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