AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 12/05/08
sorry but this story is all over the place and hard to follow |
Author Feedback: Thanks, that is sort of the point. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 10/05/08
I wonder why Hermione is so adamant to not tell Harry everything, and most of all why is she pushing him away...  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Hopefully it will be revealed soon. |
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yeay! progress for Harry and Hermione! Things are looking up. It's been a while since you updated huh? Keeping your readers waiting. hehe
can't wait for the next one to come up!
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Author Feedback: Sorry about the extremely long wait. Life's been busy but I will be updating all my stories and I have started working on the next chapter already. |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 10/05/08
I am really glad you are back. Will we find out about Remus soon? That has me worried!!
I really thought we were going to see Hermione tell Harry the whole story.....draging our feet a little??  And why does Harry think she owes him any type of explanation. He was gone for all those years....did he think about her???Contact her??? Has he Lost his mind? I still can't believe they stayed away that long. They didn't just find themselves...they were trying (it seems to me) to re invent themselves.(I know the attention thing)
Why have Draco and Hermione, and Luna gotten so close. Why do they all live at the Manor?
I understand Primus is a Dark Lord copy cat, but I am still kinda confused why it is that dangerous! Why the wards at the Manor being so strong and confusing.
Good story, I am really looking forward to the next TIMELY(?) update. 
Please don't do like JKR and kill Remus.....I really hated her for that. |
Author Feedback: Don't worry about Remus. He's in the next chapter. I won't be doing like JKR.
Sorry for dragging the story, it just happens that way. Everytime I decide to write more of the back story things pop into my head.
I'm slowly trying to address why Hermione and Draco are so close. I'll get there. I just can't seem to find the right moment to explain it all. I started with Neville's little dialog with Ginny.
Primus isn't supposed to be a dark load copy cat!!!! I'll have to put that somewhere in the story.
The wards are strong because Draco is supposed to be evil not good. It's suppsoed to prevent persons popping in on him. It's also, from the bad guys perspective, to keep the Ministry out! |
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wow!! nice chapter it rox like hell plz keep writing |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I plan to keep writing. Don't worry. |
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I just got a chance to read this story and I love it! I like the slow progress of everything, makes for a very realistic and believable timeline. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what else is going to happen. Update soon! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. It made me laugh! My major complaint from reviewers is that it is too slow and very confusing so your review was a nice change. |
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great job!the story is fantastic!keep up the excellent work on it! i cant wait to read the rset of it! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the wonderful review. |
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ZSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 09/05/08
yes and update at last, great chapter, i like how harry and hermione r finally getting closer, and i love luna and her comments "go curl up next to harry" funny.. update soon |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I hope I keep Luna up to the standard you expect. She's very difficult to write. |
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u rok i love this story and i really enjoy reading it and i appriciate all of ur stories and really like the plot a lot |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. The new chapter is up! |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 02/03/08
whats lupin doing there?did they take him when they saw harry was missing?and hermione should be some what grateful that harry SAVED HER LIFE!udpate soon |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! Great news, the new chapter is up!  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 14/02/08
Another cliffie? However, I've read the review replies you posted to my reviews and all I can say is, I'll have to follow this story and see where it goes. The only thing I clearly understood till now is that this Primus is an hell of a bad guy, everything else is a mess to me. Especially some of the relationships between the characters, for example why everyone's so friendly with Draco, and why he and Hermione are extra close. But I guess you'll explain in due time, right?   |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 14/02/08
what the hell? Well, I guess I'll find out more next chap, but I swear this must be one of the most cryptic and confusing stories I've ever read... |
Author Feedback: I love Cryptic and confusing! Thank you. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 14/02/08
Why the hell are Hermione and Ginny duelling? By the way, the HHr scene wasn't so much of a shipping scene, you know. I wonder why she's so adamant that he has to leave. and Neville didn't do much to answer the question about why she's so close to Draco...I still have troubles following this story, I hope you'll start clearing things up soon because right now I don't know where you're going with this. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the consistent reviewing. I've changed the description to Suspense. I've been wondering about tagging an AU on to the description as well.
I'll add more of an explanation about Draco in the Hhr chat. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 14/02/08
This story gets more confusing by the minute. And what the hell was Draco's warning to Harry not to hurt Hermione again? Why would he care so much? |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I really do like Draco and I always thought if he had just dropped his old Slytherin act he could have had so much potential.
I did note that at the end of DH, he was free and not in Azkaban even after all he had done! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/02/08
Er...it's your story, so I guess the reason for them having to kill Arthur it's your choice. But, I think it way too farfetched. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I see you made it to the end. |
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I need to stop the Cliffie habbit. I'm trying very hard not to end the next chapter on a cliffie. I was thinking of ending with Luna asking very casually if Ron or Draco had killed each other yet? But I'm not sure. That could be a cliffie since I didn't plan on writting the scene with them and Lupin in the next chapter. What do you think?