Harry85Signed | Chapter : 35 | Date : 02/07/09
I wonder, is Hermione coming down with some kind of illness? Hopefully not, thatìs the last thing they need. Or maybe she's pregnant? But she would have morning sickness if she was.
Anyway, I'm glad the Potters are back, still not too keen on Ginny being this powerful, but I guess I'll have to bear it.   |
Author Feedback: Why was I under the impression I replied to this review of yours already!? O.o
And no, Hermione's weakness is a result of the spell...nothing more than that. I know powerful!Ginny is a pet peeve of yours...but she does seem the sort of witch to wield significant power... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 34 | Date : 30/06/09
Well, they managed to bring back two and that's good, although now Draco, Ginny, Luna will be out for a while to restore their energies, and Hermione will need quite some rest too. But it's looking good right now.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks.  Draco and Ginny will be recovering...I think Hermione may have to do double duty in the next chapter... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 33 | Date : 17/06/09
Well, when will the Marauders be brought back? I would have thought the Order would have done it already...
Anyway, I hope next chapter comes soon, and Bellatrix's fall too. |
Author Feedback: That's the thing...they could have, but it would happen offstage...one of the reasons I want to bring them back next chapter potentially, is to make sure the story captures it.
A couple of days...it will be up. Bella's fall is a tad further down the road... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 32 | Date : 13/06/09
Pretty exciting stuff. I hope you more of this story ready to go soon.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks.
Working on chapter 33...for some reason, hit a snag on how exactly to go about on the plot... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 32 | Date : 12/06/09
It was a good chapter, still Dolohov seems too good to me, but anyway he's dead now. Can't wait to see what happens next |
Author Feedback: Granted, I like to deviate slightly from the established character identities...Dolohov is largely a mystery in the books...why not have a little fun?
Thanks, and working on the next one...I can see the light at the end of the tunnel for this story at last. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 32 | Date : 12/06/09
Remove and transfer the last spell...that was too easy! 8 9 10 words
N.O.C.  |
Author Feedback: Well, good job. You get the prize.
Aiming to break away from the Latin basis for the spells that are part of the HP series and consequent fanfiction.
Thanks for the review! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 31 | Date : 08/06/09
I find a bit hard to believe that Dolohov could have followed them through a busy city like London, especially Muggle London which he doesn't know well. Also, how come that Voldemort couldn't smell a spy in his ranks if his life depended on it, and Bellatrix seems to be able to spot them so easily? A bit too powerful/smart, isn't she? |
Author Feedback: DOlohov has been around since the start...he's such a character that nobody can really be sure what he does and doesn't know...
As for Voldemort, he probably knew, but he was also more pragmatic than Lestrange - if Demetris was useful, why expose him?
I'm not sure Lestrange is more powerful or smart - she's more paranoid and determined though compared to ol' voldie...not as able to use situations to her advantage as much, else the order would be long gone...I'm trying to play in a streak of madness that'll be her downfall in the end, if all goes to plan... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 04/06/09
Well it's good that the whole gang will be coming back. The Marauders (minus Pettigrew) back in action, sounds good. |
Author Feedback: Gah
This story is getting way too deep... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 31/05/09
Um...anonymous reviewer, you do realize this is Portkey, don't you? Around here, its All Harmony/All the Time. If H/Hr squicks you out, you're definitely at the wrong place.
Ignores the haters, gti88. I'm looking to forward to what's coming next. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for battling on my behalf...I appreciate it.
And one review is enough to spur me on...creative boost the last few days, which I hope will last...next chapter goes up tomorrow, I hope... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/05/09
YUCK!... H/Hr?...you're pathetic. gosh come on, move on... it's H/G..i don't like the idea of harry/hermione... i think i'm gonna vommit...i still love ron for hermione and plus you're not a good writer (this comment has nothing to do with the story). you didn't execute a good conversation |
Author Feedback: Well yes, H/G, if you're a hopelessly retarded HP fanboy/girl/mix of both...you fit the bill.
And I agree...the earlier chapters aren't exactly the best...still learning the ropes back then. It was meant to be a short sequel, but things turned out differently... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 26 | Date : 02/01/09
Well, I'm touched that you felt the need to modify the storyline because of my useless rant last time
Although, I wish we had more information on how Bellatrix killed Lupin from the inside, and how Dolohov was able to infiltrate Ginny's mind, because both seem awfully difficult things to do. |
Author Feedback: I take reviews very seriously Considering I'm thinking up this story as I go, the input helps...
As for Bella and Dolohov...I've arranged for those details to be revealed later on... |
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thanks for the update. I don't think you contradicted previous chapters, but you had Lestrange saying "Your job, considering the expendables cadres you are, is to prevent the werewolf from coming back along with Harry Potter, as he will sacrifice himself to initiate the process." but then Avery and Nott speculating as to whether they'd use Harry at the end, when Bellatrix just told them. not that big a deal, though. |
Author Feedback: Ah! How did I not pick that up, and it was the same chapter...I'll rectify the issue in the next chapter...thanks for pointing that out. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 31/12/08
Well I have read her stories, and I want to say that she was the writer who wrote "Shadow Walks" and such, that is another one of my favorite stories. Great job on this. Well, I am off to read more. Now I know what you meant by bringing back Remus. |
Author Feedback: Also, Resistance...that story is so intense to read...
Glad we got Remus cleared up. And that's for email #30 or 31... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 31/12/08
Oh dear...I knew that snippet I read had more significance. Well you did tell me that Remus was going to make some type of come-back, well in a certain way, so I can't berate you too much. Great job on this chapter. What happened to Tonks and Teddy though? |
Author Feedback: Snippets are always highly significant... Remus is making a come-back, but later...
Tonks and Teddy...they're still in the works...Tonks is expecting, and Teddy...did I mention him in a previous chapter? |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 31/12/08
Well at least they have decided to fight for the Light, despite all the murders and everything else they have committed. Great job on this chapter. I really love how intricate all your details are.. It is starting to make sense with all those snippets you let me see.
Oh I see now!!! Remus is going to die soon!!! Ooooo!!!!! I don't want to read the next few chaptesr! I'm almost done, I make good time. |
Author Feedback: Conscience is a bitch... They've been working for the order for a while now, so it's only a formal arrangement that they confirm it...
Remus, rest in peace... |
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