AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 18/01/09
was not expecting that lol still very good though lol hopin the next book is as good as ur first 2 lol xxx |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 18/01/09
brill story im lovin it so far dont be 2 long on the other stories im a fas reader lol xxx |
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I wasn't expecting that to be what Emma said, but I'm really not surprised that Lockhart would be gay, I figure that he loves himself so much, that no one else could compare. Great story, looking forward to the next one. |
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Cuz Dumbledore is a git, not training Harry at all to prepare him for the showdown with Voldemort proves that. I'm also glad you killed off that bitch Umbridge, it disappointed me when Harry didn't zap her good when he had the chance in DH, course most of that book was a disappointment, so no surprise there. |
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I never liked her crush either, for someone so smart and logical, I never figured Hermione would go so googly eyed over that moron. Especially when he proved time and again that he didn't know a damn thing. And I'm glad Hermione got Crookshanks this early, she needed a Familiar. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 25/03/08
I sure enough didn't expect Emma's revelation. If I have to be completely truthful, I found it a bit silly, too. Especially after having been in contact with that evil book, even if Ginny was the one brought down into the chamber. |
Author Feedback: Now that I think back on it, I agree, it was kind of weak. However, I did think it was funny at the time. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 25/03/08
Thinking about it, the fact that the Basilisk wa snever spotted is strange, being this big, if it slithered through the castle at its will. I think you must be right about the attacks all being enar the bathroom. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/03/08
So Blaise figured it out? I thought Hermione would do it... |
Author Feedback: I figured it would be nice to have someone else take the glory for a change. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/03/08
So is Emma going to be led in the chamber soon? I bet she is. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/03/08
Nice chap. So he now showed he's a parselmouth, uh? I'm sure the other students won't take it well. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/03/08
Nice chap, I like how you're going through the canons econd year. I think I was right in guessing Emma will take Ginny's place in the plot. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/03/08
On the question, he didn't because Fudge wouldn't have allowed him to.  He's important, but he's not the minister.
On the chapter, I liked it. I kind of suspect Emma will be brought in the chamber instead of Ginny... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/03/08
Well, you could have eliminated the crush altogether without need to give Hermione a sister, |
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AnnFSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 02/02/08
Wouldn't Harry and Michael be warned about not trusting things that you don't know where the brain is? Like Mr. Weasley taught his family? Especially given Grimmauld pl - one would think they would have been taught to be wary. |
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Cool.
I liked it alot... But its still too quick. I really think that you should show us a little more what Harry is thinking and feeling, give it more emotional depth.
But you're free to ignore me of course.
On my way to read your third...  |
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