This ws an excellent story, I loved it, even though I didn't review any of the previous chapters, for that I'm sorry. But that's just how I opperate, I read a whole story, and then post my review at the end of the story, on the last chapter.


I loved this story, it was kinda humourous to me, even if that wasn't the direction you wanted it to go. I loved everything about every chapter, especially the chapter where Harry and Hermione finally got together, and I loved all of the new inventions that the pair came up with. They were very well thought out and extremely useful. I especially enjoyed the ending of the story, where they had a daughter, BTW, I love the name Willow Deliah Potter, it clicks, and it goes together perfectly. It also strikes me as a name that Harry and Hermione would have given one of their children, if they had married in the canon stories. But I do have some questions to ask.
1. Did Dumbledore and the Order of the Phoenix ever figure out that Harry and Hermione were Death's Hunters?
2. Did they ever figure out that Harry was a descendent of Mortis?
3. Did Harry and Hermione reveal that they were married and had a child?
4.If the answer to #3 is yes, how did the remaining Weasley's react?
That is all of my questions, and once again I want to say I really loved this story, it was completely fantastic.

I enjoyed reading this story. It was different (good different) from the usual. Made for good reading.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.

Um I just want to point out in your an you said :I know that the Taboo was one of the less popular ideas that were added in Deathly Hallows: Well the truth is that the hole darn boon was the less popular idea. It was like a bad fanfic. She should have put a AN saying that all the books from 1-5 should be disregarded. How the the Hollows have been a power that the Dark Lords knows not. Um yes he did all he did not know is that Harry was the master of the wand not him. Oh well I like the story so far keep up the writing.

Very well written story. It's a great take on the whole universe.

You took 12 chapters to establish the characters and one and a half to kill Voldy and the entire Deatheater army. It sounds like either you just got tired of the story and wanted to end it or you didn't know where to go from chapter 12.

fighting dementors physically? "the only way to defeat a dementor is with the patronus spell" remus lupin prisoner of azkaban

I really like your writing style, as it keeps me reading even if the plot or topic is not one of my favorites. Personally, I thing this story was good until the point where Harry and Hermione, or rather Mortis and Mortitia bacame renowned. After that point its just anticlimactic resolve lengthened over several chapters. Although a good and interesting story telling throughout the whole piece, it could have been more interesting if GB had been more of a challenge, not appearing almost as an afterthought. Possible solution to this would have been more emphasis on the planning stage, with several problems popping up and a hunt for their resolve. Leaving them still unsure of Voldemorts real strengths and an unsure outcome of that big battle. Maybe even made more difficult by the meddling of an old grandfather we all know...

Concluding: I couldn't write a story if my life depended on it, but I hope I was able to give you a few ideas how to build a little more suspense to have the story more interesting until the end.

I rather enjoyed reading the fic you typed up. Interresting use of character progression, although (I can't believe I'm saying this...) maybe a bit more fluff and filler? I feel like I lost 15 years of H/HR that I'll never get back haha. Anywho, write that sequel and I, for one, will read it.

First I'd like to say I'm enjoying this story.

Second, yes this is a nitpick, I'm so sorry but it bugged me when I first read it.
"If you forget your combination, you can reset it by turning it to zero and tapping the dial three times."
Whats the use of a combination if you can just reset the lock that easily?

Like I said I'm so sorry for nitpicking. Now on to the rest of the story.

Hermione is quite handy with all those tools. It reminds me a little of Ironman...

Your Ginny is wonderful! Smart, witty, quick thinking- however your Ron is a bit of an oaf. Poor Ron! I hope we get to see more Ginny.

Trelawney's comment about her tea brand had me literally laughing out loud. I like your sense of humor!

I'm enjoying this so far- I think the funny parts are your strongest.

AWESOME!
Really love ur style of writing... i always waned 2 see harry take his own route n get powerful... defying dumbledore was cool too
gr8 job... keep it up

So Sweet .

I think I happened to run into a fic like this before, but that was before HBP was released. I'm glad I could read something similiar.

I like powerful HP, and sometimes it's difficult to find a story like this.

Done? Already? I vote for a sequel, for what it's worth!

That said, I liked most of this chapter. I could see Harry getting so caught up in his quest that he'd spend 13 years doing nothing but mercenary work--but somehow my brain doesn't want to see Hermione doing the same. Have a heavy *focus* on merc work, yes, but I can't see her ignoring everything else. She's too smart for that.

But I liked that they didn't want to rest on their laurels, and that they went on to found their own company. And the name was great. If you do a sequel, could we maybe see the various reactions to that name and what it signifies?