apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/09
An interesting beginning (I know I'm coming to this story very late, and I apologize for that). My first thought about your challenge would make for a very short story, since it involved Dumbledore telling Harry and then obliviating him.
It's going to be a very interesting few years for Harry with the Hermione/Ginny competition in full swing starting from that first summer.
Looking forward to reading the rest of this story. |
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merlin22Signed | Chapter : 29 | Date : 01/07/09
So...love the story. But I noticed a continuity error. In Chap. 28, when the trio is in Dumbledore's office requesting to take the OWL early, Harry says that he will not expose his Metamorphmagus ability but in Chap. 29, when Dumbledore confronts Harry about bullying his cousin, he is "genuinely curious" about how he changed his appearance. Just a thought. Love this story, this is somewhere around the 15th time I've read it. I love all of your stories, actually. |
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JarkeSigned | Chapter : 31 | Date : 19/06/09
Another brilliant story, rewritten and completely different, and yet the same. Although I like your trio with Harry Ginny and Hermione, I think that if/when Harry and Hermione started dating, then Ginny would be too jealous of Hermione to speak to her. If the trio shouldn't include Ron, then it should instead include Neville, because of who he actually might have become. Anyways, great story as always. I have yet to be dissappointed by one of your stories |
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PontyBoySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/09
Enjoyed all your stories so far & I'm looking forward to this one |
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An excellent story! 
As usual I really enjoy your writing. 
Off to find another... 
Mae |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 28/08/08
Is this going to turn out H/h because its not really right now!!! |
Author Feedback: If this didn't turn out H/Hr, do you really think it would be posted here?
Even if I tried to slip a non-H/Hr story onto the site, I firmly believe it would've been removed.
I do realize that this is my only story on this site where that relationship isn't obvious from the first chapter, but I figured it didn't have to be. Harry was, after all, 11 years old at that time. |
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not satisfied with the epilouge leaving it up to us. good story but that ending was abrupt, a chapter for closure would have been nice |
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thank you for being merciful and not murdering sirius we all know harry didn't deserve to lose yet another parent he barely knew |
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all i'm gonna say is let the man live, it upset me enough when he died the first time around |
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a malfoy turn i do love it, you paint him as a frail and timid creature, very well done |
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marvelous, i really thinking before the end of the month i may end up finishing the library of storied you've written |
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your ignoring ron yet again but this time you don't make him seem so much a villian (so far) as you do immature. it works for me this time, harry becoming a quickly matured individual due to knowing his future and ron staying a young male. Hopefully he gets some nice moments and not turned into a jerk in this story, just cause he's not the type of guy you like doesn't mean he's gotta become a bad guy. Its much simpler to make him an extra like seamus and dean. |
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GuyroSigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 26/03/08
in the context (triwizard tournament) this sentance from your story is the best and funniest piece of fanfiction i have ever read
“I must say that was an excellent shot, Harry.” |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 31 | Date : 22/01/08
I loved the story, and it's going straight into my favs, but I think you could have bothered with a real epilogue. Or, you could have set the story three years later so Harry and Hermione would have graduated at the end of it. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 22/01/08
So Harry willingly entered the tournament? Interesting. Although, it's not fair that he ahs to face twice the dangers... |
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