HP5OotPUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
Usually, i enjoy fanfics that have continuous chapters or more than one chapter(i'm not taking it as an offensive comment) 
But so far, this has been the most exciting one-chapter fanfic that has ever entered my eyes and stayed in my head 
Don't stop writing i  your fanfics!  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
That was really enjoyable to read. REALLY really great and really cute. Nice job at how you wrote about all the time, like when you wrote about how much time had passed, it wasn't rushed. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I am glad that you enjoyed the story. |
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i love absolutely adore how harry propesd you ahve changed me for good!!!!!! i thought all proopsals wre corny but not anynor thank you!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I too find proposals corny. That's why I tried to do something different, something that would mean a lot to Hermione. I tried to keep away from the ring in the box, the ring in desert, the obvious get down on one knee and ask " Will you Marry Me!" yick.
I did subtly get Harry down on his knees though becuase I wanted him to be close to her and not a table apart when she discovered the ring. |
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JessyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
god, I love this chapter so far! It's great! I can't wait till you update! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review but the story was a one-shot. Previous reviewers have been convincing me to write a sequel though.  |
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I'm glad the guys didn't get that upset when they found out about the little "quiz".
I like the little input on Dobby there too!
Great job!
~*Eli |
Author Feedback: I just had to mention Dobby! He is too adorable. I honestly wish I had a house elf!!! No more chores!!! Thanks for the review. |
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This was a cute story, I like what Ron said, "We're each different and where as Harry might be the perfect boyfriend for Hermione he won't be the perfect one for you. There is no way for you to compare us.” Nice little deep insight for him, you know he doesn't get very many of those moments in the books! Anyways, good story, keep up the good work in your writing! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I can't bash Ron forever so I decided to give him some insight. I suppose the inuendo here is that Luna is changing him for the better. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
Well there some thing interesting it's was fun to read.
Harry and Hermione are the best couple in the world.
Keep up the wonderful and Excellent work.
I love this story.
Alayneni you rock.
Now it's time to end this comment with a cartoon
ending.
So here it's go's.
Tha tha tha that's all floks! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I love Hhr. You know, I would love to include that closing line at the end of one of my stories. It's Daffy duck right. I can just picture Harry saying it! |
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
The Guys let them off to easy. I do not meen they sould not get married but I think a small prank is in orer. cute story nice work thanks.
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Author Feedback: Yeah I know they let them off easy but I really couldn't think of anything that they would do. Maybe in the sequel I'll put a little revenge in. |
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mimiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
Cute story! Does that ending indicate there's a sequel (or three) in the works? |
Author Feedback: There might be a sequel. I realised that I have another one shot that could be bent to fit into this uninverse. It'll also help that I won't have too much to write. I take forever to update! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
That was SUCH a good story!!!!!!!
The title was very catchy...and the story was just absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!
Good Job and keep up the good work!!!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I like the title. In fact before the story started with just the title and I buillt it around that. |
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It was adorable--Harry and Hermione were so good together--I wish you'd written a sequel or another chapter or something! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Good news there is a possiblity of a sequel but don't expect it for quite a few months. I'm really bogged down with a couple of stories. |
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I love a bit of fluff in the day I love it, and would love to read about the actual weddings if you ever decide to do that |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I don't know about the actual weddings. I have another one shot that I started working on that could fit into this story line nicely. It would save a lot of work. I'll see what I can do but I can't promise anything. |
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JMischiefUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
nice story, but i was a little disappointed at the end 
i was hoping that the 3 boys put this article into witch weekly. knowingly that the girls couldn't resist
cheers,
JM |
Author Feedback: Oh that's an interesting idea. I never thought of it. I had a lot of trouble writing the end to this story. Thanks for the review. |
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