that was a really great one shot......unfortunately its just a one shot ...but great

it's beautiful.... just beautiful... but i see you haven't written any other stories so i suggest you continue writing.. you have a gift i wish i have...

I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!!

I have re-read this. It's just so beautiful. Please don't stop writiing!

Absolutely brilliant story. I felt every line and word. It read much like my favorite poetry. I can even envision several paragraphs in a poetry format. Thanks.

Wow, That was amazing! I love how Harry and Hermione just realize how right they are together. Well done!

That was pretty deep. The short sentence really gave it the extra umphs.. I liked it

I'm not sure what to say about this.
The way they read each other. The way you can almost hear their breathes, their quickening heartbeats... The way you write them so sure about everything. The don't have a doubt about their feelings, they know it's right.
It's like that it's supposed to be.
It's beautiful.
Thanks fpr sharing

That was beautiful and captured their deep bond. I like that it was written in the present tense, so the reader is really in the moment with them.

This is really beautiful. You made me cry! You should write more fanfics-definately!

that was wonderful! i loved it and ur writing- please continue u have a talent.

I liked the ending a lot, it was very powerful, in a way... at the beginning I was growing kind of bored cuz it's the typical conversation, but the end made up for it Shame they are still with the redheads just kidding... nice story

good first story! well-written and a good amount of fluff in it lol. well done!

t.s. eliot??? is that you???

hehe. of course, the love song of j. alfred prufrock was always my fav poem of his...

will you be writing more soon??? i'm looking foward to it!!!

I loved this, and I'm not really in to one shots! It was very sweet at the end. Cant wait to see more from you...maybe something longer?!

Is this really a one-shot? I would want to know what happens after the war? This is is a very nice prologue of what is to come...Hope you have the time to continue the plot..Probably just to see if they will have their happy ending despite the rough path!