AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/08/07
this story is good...It kept me on my toes...can't wait to see what happens, and keep up the good work!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! I'll try to keep up the good work. |
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Aw I really like this! I hope you're going to keep writing it!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'm not giving up on any of my stories though I have gotten a bit ridiculous with the amount of stories that I have to update! |
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Your story looks very interesting! I liked the idea of all of them living together! Strange and definitely uncomfortable at a times (the boys bringing friends) but I like it!!! I loved it when the girl said yet about the wife thing!!! Great moment!! I hope to see a new chapter soon! Until then!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'll work on getting the new chapter soon. |
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RowenaSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/07/07
How cute! Please update soon! I can't wait for more! Also, happy 4th of July if you celebrate it! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoyed your 4th of July. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/07/07
this is very cute. i remember i had read it before but since you had not updated i had forgotten what the story was about. please update soon . this is a very cute and sweet story |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'll try not to let too much time pass before the next update. |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/02/07
Definately enjoying this story so far. I can't wait to see further updates on it. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I have already started writing the next chapter but I wouldn't expect an update too soon. There are four other stories I have to update before this one. But you never which one my muse will choose! |
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ivyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/02/07
oh, I ike this so far!!! I got confused, though. Is the name of Harry's fling, Sarah or Heather? Keep on updating!!!! |
Author Feedback: Sorry. Her original name was Heather. I changed it to Sarah cause Heather is a member of his Auror team and I decided I didn't want him dating her. Very sorry. I thought I made all the changes! 
Thanks for the review. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/02/07
Two excellent twists - the mother of three (and the keys) and Adam. Adam sounds like a nice sort - he's smart if he went to Cambridge, and kind to Hermione when she was a child. He doesnt know she's a witch, right?
Looking forward to seeing how Harry reacts to Hermione dating someone else. |
Author Feedback: Great to see you reviewed! I thought you might have stopped after chapter 2. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the twists. Stay tuned for Harry's reaction. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/02/07
this was very good i hope you update soon because i would like to know what happens to those kids |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. As for updating soon. I am terrible with that. I have too many stories going! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/02/07
Great start, I really like this fic so far, lots going on already. All the boys need a good smack. Ginny needs a good hexing! She's such a bitch to Hermione. I hope Adam rubs Harry the wrong way - he sounds like he's being a real idiot to Hermione. I only hope Adam isn't an evil guy, I'd like to have a great guy pay attention to Hermione - why should Harry get all the admirers. This Sarah sounds like a real biatch. OK, so a list of people that need to pay for being mean to our Hermione: the iodiots on her quiddach team, Ginny, Harry, Sarah, Cho...I'm with-holding judgement on Lav Lav for the time being...wow, you really make her seem like a victim of alot of hatred so far! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I didn't mean for them all to hate her. Ginny doesn't really hate her. She was just a bit upset. Her Quidditch team definitely hates her. As for Sarah, maybe. Cho is also a definite yes. I'll make sure Hermione gets the loving she deserves. Don't Worry.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/12/06
This is a great story.I like the way you split the aurors into teams.And your idea of a sorting sword was really cool too.Please post again soon.PLEASE!!!!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I am working on chapter 2 but the earliest it will be out is next week. Sorry. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/06
I like this story already and have only read the prologue.But I do have some questions.Is Viveck really Lord Voldemort,or is Voldemort trying to get Vivecks power?And is the old man Dumbledore?
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I never really thought about Viveck's relationship to Voldemort. Right now it's still along the lines of evil is evil no matter what time period you are in right? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/12/06
very interesting, really. I liked the ideas of the teams, the tournament... I've never read anything like that and it's goode to read something that we know that the author spente more than five minutes thinking about it... so now I'm super curious about where the story goes...
layla |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/12/06
interesting story so far. looking forward to the next chapter. update soon. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. The next update won't be out until next week after Christmas. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/12/06
The Auror teams are a bit Hogwarts-heavy, innit? No members of a Hogwarts student in the year above or below Harry's year, for example!
Pink team?
Who's Ron with again? |
Author Feedback: Actually I don't think the teams are Hogwarts heavy. The only people on the teams from Harry's year besides Ron, Draco and Hermione are Neville, Blaise and Seamus. That's only 28% of this department which considering size of the magical community and the popularity of the position and the fact that there isn't really more than one place to do the job at I don't think it's too high.
During the war a lot of Aurors would have died and thus they would have needed to recruit heavily from the first graduating class of Hogwarts. It makes sense.
There are also other Auror's positioned through out the country.
Luna and Ginny are below and Cho, Zacharius and Lee are above Harry's year. There are lot of other people mentioned that could be from above or below them.
So far JKR hasn't mentioned any other wizarding school in England thus the majority of the Aurors should be from Hogwarts! I highly doubt they would appreciate a foreigner doing the job of an Auror.
Ron is with Cho, Angela, Rebecca and Harriet. The latter three are charcters that I introduced but haven't elaborated on yet.
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. |
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