I liked it - it was a bit agnsty and I don't really like the thought of the trio's freindship coming to an end, but maybe you could iron that out in future chapters  There will be future chapters, won't there? I hope so |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I didn't really plan for future chapters. Just other one shots in this universe. The next one is from Ron's point of view and don't worry the friendship will survive. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
I like that very much. It seems to me that Ron would do something like that |
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whoa this is so weird. No not your story! Today I just got my author application back and it was approved. I submitted my story and guess what the title is. The Letters.
So I just wanted to let you know that I didn't steal your title and that my story has a totally different mood then yours.
Anyways your story is very good. I love the idea of Ron coming back and finding out his chance was gone with Hermione. hahaha yeah I'm so mean.
Can't wait to read more of your work,
Vio |
Author Feedback: This really is weird cause I got my author application back today also! I posted right away. There is a sequel to this. I also have some other stories to post but I really need a beta. Can't wait to see your story up. |
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BiggyMUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
He's a git. Simple as that. Ron is a self centered egotistical jackass of a git. If I was Harry I would of killed him. To leave for 5 years, sleeping with anything in a skirt, and come back and propose with no warning or regards to her feelings, with no guilt or remorse for his actions, his lies? Have a sequel and kill him. Thatll make me happy .... Im such an evil person |
Author Feedback: thanks for the review. There is a sequel and thought I thought about it, I didn't kill Ron! I actually used Luna to try and pound some sense into him so he could see how wrong he was! The sequel should be up soon. |
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MerleUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
You make it quite easy to hate Ron in this story, which is quite realistic in my opinon! The only way it could have gotten better was Hermione seriously hexing Ron, or freezing him there and having some fun with Harry! I liked the way Harry was supportive, but quietly jealous, and Hermione finally saw that. Well done! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. It was greatly appreciated. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
Well its nice to see a story where Ron leaves and not Harry or Hermione for a change. |
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i really liked this fic... it made me angry, but at the same time, it was sweet and my favorite couple got together... heehee... i get tired of reading stories where Harry goes away to find himself, leaving Ron and Hermione alone to their own devices... i like that you've switched things up. and ron is just a big fat jerk, thinking she wuld right into his arms -and his bed- after 5 YEARS! puh-lease! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! I really enjoyed reading your comments. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
Sad but I love H/Hr so much that its ok, plus i never liked Ron and I LOVE how you showed him as an arogant asshole who only cares about sex, I've been looking for someone to say that for the last year.... Great Story can't wait for update. |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
Wow I really liked this so far. Is this planned on being a one shot or is there going to be some followup on it? |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. This is the first story in a series. I plan on developing this universe a bit. There is a sequl which I will post soon. The sequel though is R/LL. It continues on after this from Ron's point of view. It's called "The Start of a New Life"
Look out for it if you are interested. |
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