AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 31/07/09
Hmm...it's weird...Harry finding her and bringing her back, it's almost anticlimatic -_-" everything else was so dramatic and emotional, but this...seemed kind of skimmed over. |
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Just a few quick words to add this to my favourites, I'll come back with a proper review as soon as I can. |
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This is amazingly written. I could not stop reading it, wanting Harry to find Hermione, wanting it to come true. So heartbreaking to read the transitions, but my, you threaded this so brilliantly. This is honestly better than canon, but I don't want to put Hermione or Harry through it! Amazing.
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MysticSamSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 06/06/09
Found this through a story on ff.net Love it so far; adding to favs to finish later. |
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That was beautiful. I can't count the number of times I cried. I think the one of the most heartwrenching scenes was with the deadHarry Hermione. For them to be together, but NOT be together. This story was amazing! Add to my favs! I LOVED IT!! |
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Raven3182Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 30/03/09
Once again, you've proved yourself to be my favorite author. I love you stories so much! I think that this could have done without the mention of prostitution... it didn't really add much to the story... but oh well. I can't find any other fault with it. Simply marvelous! Thank you! |
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VanderSigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 27/03/09
I don't normally review very many fanfics unless I feel the story was particularly good or if a specific scene or chapter affected me. You accomplished both in a huge way in this story.
The anguish that both the "other" Hermione and Harry go through when they were together had me in tears because of the intense longing they had for their versions of each other. Never in any fanfic has a scene affected me as much as this one and I struggle to even think about it without crying. By the time Harry left that Hermione, I nearly wanted him to stay with her.
You're story was one of the most emotionally powerful fanfic I've ever read and your ability to capture the essence of their pain was masterful. I look forward to the sequel. |
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thyrokioSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 24/02/09
This story was incredibly awesome really. Omg makes you feel really sad and all. Nicelly written. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/02/09
That is a hellishly good first chapter, well written and makes me insanely curious.
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leO.TSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/09
WOWO intresting story waiting on TO NEXT CHAPTER!!!! i need to do this so i can add things grr grr grr ON TO NEXCT CHAPTER! |
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I had the urge to read this again today...its like my 4th time. You're so good... |
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That was absolutely fantastic. The plot was original and brilliant. The first few chapters captured quite well the pain and suffering all three were going through without Hermione. Though you started in the middle of everything, it felt natural to have the blanks filled in. Everything was superbly done, and nothing felt out of place.
Multiverse travel has always intrigued me, but writing it well, while avoiding paradoxes and plot holes, is very difficult. This story just flowed. Harry's adventures in the other universes were spectacular; all characters were in-character, but it was clear how subtly different they were.
Despite your misgivings, I thought the fluff and action were written well, too. It was a nice break from the sometimes depressing plot.
I'm curious about other-Hermione. I noticed that you wrote a few chapters in another story, Shadow Walker. Will you continue that?
In any case, thanks for the story. It was very enjoyable. |
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newynSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 03/09/08
Dimension-hopping has got to be one of the most difficult things to execute properly in fantastic fiction. Another is time travel. It's so easy to botch them up. You pull it off nicely here. You imagine the fantastic very well but don't let it detract from the beautiful HHr drama at the heart of the fic. Bravo!
Considering the many different things you have tried and pulled off with every fic you have done, there is no doubt you are one of the most creative and skilled authors in fanfic. I hope you keep writing and creating.
Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
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corbySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/08
This is my first review on this site, and it is a doozy. I found this story from another story on ffnet. I read this story in a day and a half. It was that freaking good. We are suffering from a dire shortage of really good post-hogwarts fics, and this filled the bill quite nicely. I really didn't know what to expect going into this one and I was pleasantly surprised at every turn. It was amazingly well written, it was not fraught with egregious spelling errors, and the story line was steady and didn't lag at any point. I give kudos to you, and I am off to read Shadow Walker. Keep it up.
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I love this story. It's so entertaining, yet so heartbreaking...but it's full of hope which is what HH is all about. |
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