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go_sullivan
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 07/02/09
Wow. That was quite the creative way of destroying the Horocruxes. I noticed that there were only three.

And Dean Thomas. That was nice. I suppose the two girls were Lavender and Parvati.

Like I said I hate how Jo left us hanging when it came to the other characters at the end of the series.

 

go_sullivan
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/02/09
I hope you got my review for this chapter. Since my web browser crashed.

Wonderful story I'd just like to say.
 

go_sullivan
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/02/09
"Avada Kedavra is too clean, too final… a person killed by it can't possibly become a ghost." SEE just what I said earlier, no? You'd think a death eater would use the bloodiest most destructive spell...

Those vampires were cool. That's how you write vampire Stephanie Meyer or whatever your name is!

And man. Hermione was so lucky Harry and Ron are SUCH GUYS. Anyone else would have made comment like "God, I hope you aren't pregnant."
 

go_sullivan
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/02/09
I wish Jo did take a page out of your book. Man. Let's see how her post Potter career will turn out.

"Voldemort wouldn't've put his soul into anything that can die," I never thought of that. But it's true isn't it? It would be stupid to do so, but apparently Jo did do that? Haha. That's why you're a great writer you notice these things...

Sorry. I had this weird image of Hope bring home a boy to meet her parents? "So you have four parents. And one of them is a portrait?" I love the idea of Portrait!Hermione.

I suppose that the wards at Hogwarts prevent Wizards from apparating. Elves and goblins... maybe it doesn't apply. I had no idea how they were using the house elves. Poor dears.

You are a truly brilliant writer.


"They're scared of Harry, love. Bellatrix is scared of the very thought of Harry Potter. That's why they want to kill him… by killing his memory, killing what he stood for. And they never will." She gave them a wide, wicked smile very unlike her. "Harry Potter defeated the most feared, most powerful, most unkillable Dark wizard ever. They're so scared of him now. You know how some of us still can't say 'Lord Voldemort'? They can't say 'Harry Potter'."

Man. If Jo had that scene, canon would be so awesoe. But she didn't and I think I'll give you the credit of having one of the most memorable Harry Potter moments ever written. The symbol that is Harry Potter is so much better in your hands.

And Ron must have been so shocked when he heard Hope say that.
 

go_sullivan
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/02/09
I personally like reducto spells. I don't know I mean those seem scarier to me. Like what's up gaping hole in your chest. The Killing Curse has the fear attached to it because it's sole purpose is to kill. But we don't know if it's a painful way to day, so it could be a let more merciful then get reducto'ed. It's just what I thought. But of course it's the intent behind it, right. You have to be so angry and malicious to use it.


YEAH. I totally called it. I was wondering why no one was like "OH Ronald. Your daugther has such beautiful green eyes... BUT WAIT!?!." It would have been so obvious. I forgot that magic could hide that sort of thing.

It's also why the Goblins are being hardasses about Harry's estate. He does have an heir.

It had taken that long for Ron to catch on to their plan: Hermione would go to Durmstrang disguised as Viktor Krum – and Harry would go disguised as Hermione. GLAD I caught on faster than Ron. I would love to see that plan carried out. Sounds like it needs it's own oneshot.



The lion furniture. Very creative. And PETA won't be down your throat if your circus has fake animals.

Centaur Liason Office. "Someone's about to get fired." Heh.

Ok. Since I wasn't raised a witch the moment the potrait talked back I would have freaked. I was hoping that it would be able to talk back since it would be nice. I also wonder how patraits work. Jo should of course write some more of those books for charity. I'd totally buy Hogwards, A History.
 

go_sullivan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/09
Aunt Ginny doesn't like Hope... GO HOPE! Be a total reminder of Hermione and Harry! IN YOUR FACE, GINNY!

I hope I'm not assuming anything by saying that. Let's see if I'm right. Because I don't know yet. You sort of hinted at it.

I don't know how I can read a Harry and Hermione Story... without them...
 

mer_person
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 01/12/08
Ahhh! This was just an absolutely brilliant story. You have done a fantastic job =) I loved all of Luna's names for Hope. They were so adorable and so typically Luna. Cant wait for more chapters on your other stories
 

sweetsoutherngal
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 01/12/08
Excellent story. I just read it all the way through, and I really enjoyd it. I thought I was confused at first, and maybe the link hadn\'t been orange...and I laughed when I saw you AN at the top of the second chapter. I figured pretty quickly that Hope was Harry\'s as well...but I figured it was from an affair, and I was so upset. I hate affair stories! I was really glad that it wasn\'t an affair.

The story was well written, and well planned. Rather long, took me a while to read...but that\'s just because it was in one sitting. I should have been studying though, so...oops!

Good job!
 

broomstickflyer
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/08
Well so far all the stories of yours that I have read did not comply with the site rules because Harry and Hermione never seem to end up together as anything but friends, I have to say this one has me totally baffled so far, how can a dead Harry and a dead Hermione who died just after giving birth to Rons Daughter ever get together with Harry. I will read on but I really hope that I don't have to do what I believe I should and report these hopefully nfor removal from the site.
The writing and stories are in them selves very good, but if you are breaking the site rules it doesn't matter if you are JK Rowligs her self they are still not allowed.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 10/04/08
Interesting idea, well developed. Thanks for sharing. Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Tweak!
 

Simon
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 31/08/07
I must congratulate you on the method of destroying the Horcruxes. It's a mind-blowing chapter thanks to that very idea. Excellently well written too, kept me on my toes till the very end and I did not see it coming... Excellent, better than JKR in DH. Much better.
 

ILessThenThreeHP
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 20/08/07
i can't wait to read more! you should get more done soon! i'll be waiteing
 

kasey28
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 02/08/07
This is a great story and it just keeps pulling me in. Exceptional story telling. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
 

kasey28
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 02/08/07
This is a great story and it just keeps pulling me in. Exceptional story telling. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
 

kasey28
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 02/08/07
This is a great story and it just keeps pulling me in. Exceptional story telling. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
 

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