This was a great story. Actually I have read all of your stories and believe you are a great writer. I just can't get enough.

Urg harry is totally pissing me off....hermione is just trying to save his bloody life and all he can think about is trust? Urg

I love your story! I'd really like to translate it in my language, italian, if it's not a problem for you... A lot of italian people'd like to read it easily. Naturally, i'll quote you at the moment of the publication, with a direct link to your account, here on portkey... Tell me soon ^^

Great story, the more of your work that I read, the more I keep wanting more. I really like the way you're able to write H/Hr without making them the completely perfect, never do anything wrong or make any mistakes couple. It's obvious that they love each other, but they stay themselves as well. Great job! Please keep writing!

that was quite the ride! thanks for sharing it with us!

This stroy is so very good it defies words. Beautiful complexity - such a good numver of twists and turns leading to the hoped for happy ending.

Awesome story! I hope you keep on writing! I liked your Hermione.

Great story as always - I just finished reading it for the second time. Just a question, have you thought of writing a sort of sequel to tell us what happened -if anything- with Ginny and Draco? I know you haven't written any D/G stories but maybe that would make a good one? Pretty please?

The newspaper article at the end is a brilliant way to wrap up, and comes off so much better than the cringeworthy epilogue trap that so many fall into. You know, the ones that say, "And Harry Potter does this. And Hermione does this. And there were x children and they did that." And so on for an endless list of children, marriages and professions.

Good battle scene. I know how u feel, they are hard to write! I got shot down so bad in my reviews for a battle scene I wrote, I didn't even see it coming! I thought it was fine, but apparently I suck ha ha.
I liked this, I could see the scene in my head & it was believable.
Still better than DH -loving the Hhr moments, subtle and building up well. Love this!

Wow, this is fantastic. I much prefer this to DH, just the scenarios you've set up already - I love that they're back at Hogwarts, and it's all very realistic. Much more realistic than travelling the countryside in a tent. And I'm glad you introduced Remus & other adults into the mix, that never rang true for me either, that they wouldn't have any input or help from the Order! I love the slow build of the Hhr - this is how JK could have done it. I'm so excited to keep reading this, it's really brilliant. As for the writing, it's flawless. I really appreciate how much work you've put into this!

this seems promising and seriously, so much more believable than Deathly Hallows already! Going on my fave stories and I'm looking forward to reading more

Oww i love how you describe thier relationship and thier family interaction. Harry is finally happy after everthing he been through and thier are going to have another baby!!

Oh Ron
That was th eperfect ending to a brilliant fic! thank you soo much for that

ps. do you think you can wirte a sequel ? Great job

that chapter was beautifully written espciallt the last part with the home and thebaby rooms. I can actually feel how much they love each other

great job

wow they are going to be parents.
he desrves atleast that.

Great job